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LOC: Modesto, CA
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LAST LOGIN: November 21
LOC: Modesto, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 21
Hi I’m Travis. I’m a laid back sorta guy so any review is good, bring it. I like to write short story but people seem to respond more to my poetry, oh well.
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"Descartes said 'I think therefore I am.' He was convinced that since he had thought, that was the only real thing in the world. But even that's a fallacy. For example think about say a character in a book, he has thoughts does he not? Does that make him as real as us?" Ch. 6 Bob and Barry were both crammed into the cab of the tow truck with a large bellied man who they learned was named Roy. The cab was hot due to the fact that the AC was broken and somehow it'd suddenly gott...
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I sit at the shuttle stop and wait. I'm not just waiting for the shuttle though, I wait for her to show up. I wait for her to sit down and talk to her friend. I wait for the shuttle to pull up, so we can board, I never sit too far from here, and she never sits to far from me. We exchange glances, the awkward kind you find yourself doing in public places. She flashes her beautiful smile at me, I shoot one back. I've never heard her speak in English, and shes never heard me sp...
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There are no crowds, or cheering fans There are no shoe deals, or Gatorade ads You won't find people aurguing about multi-million dollar contracts We play until the sun goes down, and then we play some more. Because out here the only thing that matters is respect Where anyone can be a hero, or become a legend Where white and black don't matter Where the only think standing between you and greatness is a 20-foot jumper Yeah, respect is the crown of this court Where you can show up a boy,...
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Someday by. Travis Buster Someday. Someday I'll tell her. Someday she'll tell me. Someday I'll leave here. Someday I'll return. Someday I'll start my life over again. Someday I'll graduate. Someday I'll see the world. Someday I'll be glad I did. Someday a career. Someday a girlfriend. Someday a wife. Someday a house. Someday kids. Someday I'll wake up and realize I'm not as young as I used to be. Someday I'll wake up and accept that. Someday grandkids. Someday retirement. Someday...
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If we're so certin of our reality why do we doubt the importance of our existence? We have to have some reason for being.... right? CHAPTER 5: Barry took a second to take it all in, "So let me get this straight," he said with a blank look on his face, "You woke up this morning in a field with no recollection of who you are or how you got there, you were kidnapped and assulted by some men and then fell off a cliff. Survived, and washed up on my beach, taken to the hospital...
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The Six Word Memoir: A Collection of Top Ten Motivations for Writing Such Profundity for the Masses
Hahaha! That should about sum it up. Idk if everyone here will be able to apprecieate this but I found this hilarious.
Okay I am one of the ones feeling that this was hard to comprehend because you jump between the real world and the game world so much and make the game world seem real which I imagine is your purpose but it makes it hard to read for me. I also don't have much experience because I'm a gamer but MMORPG's I cannot get into so the personal connection is tough. But here's what I gather, that this other world is a dream world where Elise can be the hero, and the popular or beautiful one. And with t...
Okay you have a lot that you want rated so I'll touch on that first: As for the oppertunity ratings I really don't have any precedent for those so I gave you an 8 on the three. Now you ask about all the characterizations and every character presented here is well done given their apparent roles. By that I mean Nidal though a little less touched on works that way because he doesn't have as much going on as say the Dr. In terms of interactions I gave you a ten between Dr. Abed and Angel because...
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