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AGE:
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LOC: Philadelphia, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 25
LOC: Philadelphia, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 25
Dear future readers and writers of the world!
Hi :D My name is Angela. I’m Mainly a poet, but I love to write short stories and currently have a book going that’s already 60,000 words long, but sadly, I don’t much like it, I started writing it at 16, and man did I suck back then o.O So I’m going to start over with some new stuff! You know as they say, practice makes perfect.
I have a vivid imagination; I love to use plays on words. I absolutely love fantasy, romance, sci-fi, Manga’s (Graphic novels) , Anime, various philosophical books; including writings by Nostradamus, Newton, Hippocrates, Aristotle, and really anything that has to do with Astronomy and astrophysics… Which is weird… because I’m not that smart at all o.O; and my gramm…
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I know that I am someone, someone's what I am, But no one seems to see me. I'm nobody to them. No one spends time with me. No one's ever there. And you want to know the worst of it? No one even cares. By Angela Gwynne Perri P.S Please don't steal my work.
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If I gave you the truth, Would you still believe the lies? Hidden deep down inside, you can see it in their eyes. They can’t hide it forever, They can make you believe, you think that they are pure, it’s your heart that they deceive. And after it’s all said and done, Will you still say you loved that someone, after all the blood is spilt, will you be strong enough not to wilt? Open your fucking eyes, I know you can see through all their lies, Stop pretending to be something you’re not, And m...
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Fear has gripped this sheltered heart, that was broken from the very start, they ripped at it, tore it apart, spilled its blood, like a fine art. what woe is this, a silent tear, held back threw all those painfull years, to be let loose by someone dear, as those close, just watch and sneer A Cry for help, left with out sound, that tears the soul, as it's unwound, but where's the safety? there is none found, not when blood and tears stain the ground By Me, Angela Perri ^_^ Please review and te...
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Why Taste an illusion, When what I want is real, Why sacrifice myself, When my heart will never heal. Yet you insist I have a taste, So a few questions can I ask? Will you stay beside me, Even after learning of my past? Will you wipe away my tears, When ever I am sad? Will you apologize to me, If you ever make me mad? Will you hold me tightly, When I need your support? When I need you to be there, Will you make the effort? Will you catch me as I fall, Or watch me crash to the ground? When I c...
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Why Taste an illusion, When what I want is real, Why sacrifice myself, When my heart will never heal. But you insist I have a taste, But a few questions can I ask? Will you stay beside me, Even after learning of my past? Will you wipe away my tears, When ever I am sad? Will you apologize to me, If you ever make me mad? Will you hold me tightly, When I need your support? When I need you to be there, Will you make the effort? Will you catch me as I fall, Or watch me crash to the ground? When I ...
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This is certainly a very true. Although it seems more like a statement than a quote to me. But that's just me personally.
Ok, here's the deal. Your poem is outstanding. It's wonderful and keeps to the point. It has a wonderful flow and keeps the reader interested. However, the spelling needs a little work. I get that this perhaps supposed to be based on slang but you will never attract a publisher if you can't spell correctly or punctuate correctly. In the first verse when you put n instead of and or cuz instead of cause, you should try placing an apostrophe at the end to insinuate accent. example: cuz' or n' Bu...
Very nice! This poem made me smile. It's not my typical form of poetry but I loved the story behind it. It was adorable and silly, yet very intelligent in its own way. I like the ideals behind it very much. Thankyou.
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This piece made me giggle for some reason. That's not a bad thing either. I found it to be humorous.I personally think it was well written but was thrown off by the switch in the third paragraph. After that, I wasn't really sure what the poem was trying to express anymore.
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