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AGE: 26
LOC: La Porte, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 05

Who am I?  To me I am simplistic, but those who know me often disagree.  I am a person who lives by the values I’ve learned through my experiences in life.  I believe in honor and integrity.  I am a soldier, a father, a husband, son, and friend.  Most importantly I am a man and walk the steps I believe all men should walk.

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Short Story / Concussion
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Short Story / His Story- Part ?
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It was approximately 0200, I knew this because I lay awake watching the blazing blue numbers on the digital alarm clock tick by. It wasn’t unusual for me to be awake watching the alarm clock or staring at the shifting shadows on the stark white ceiling. It is hard for someone who is accustomed to a certain way of life to adapt to a different one, especially when that way of life is what makes them who they are. They called it transition and said, “Its normal and it will pass”. I had my doubt...
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Short Story / Concussion
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It was a night like any other, another late patrol for the "dependable" chalk. The blackhawk helicopter was a roar in my ears as I looked at the faces of the men I was responsible for through the dim glow of the instrumentation lights. I always looked at their faces, I never wanted to forget what my responsibility was; bringing them all back alive. I counted and recounted, had to know the number of men with me as I wasn't getting back on this bird if I was missing even one of them. Through t...
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Non-fiction / His Story-Part 1
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Have you ever had that nagging feeling, the feeling like you were trying to run from something you simply can't escape? That's the feeling that gnawed at me as I stepped into the terminal at Hartsfield-Jackson in Atlanta, Georgia. Accompanying me were 7 jittery young men, like myself, about to embark on a journey some would see through to its end, some would fail, but none of us would ever forget. As I acclimated to the steady, dull roar of that busy terminal I honestly felt nothing, no fear ...
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Non-fiction / His Story-Part 1
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Have you ever had that nagging feeling, the feeling like you were trying to run from something you simply can't escape? That's the feeling that gnawed at me as I stepped into the terminal at Hartsfield-Jackson in Atlanta, Georgia. Accompanying me were 7 jittery young men, like myself, about to embark on a journey some would see through to its end, some would fail, but none of us would ever forget. As I acclimated to the steady, dull roar of that busy terminal I honestly felt nothing, no fear ...
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Novel Treatments / The Prize Fighter: Chapter One
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Its a good piece and while it has a bland structure, everything seems to fit and flow. I get a sense of longing from this piece, as if you aspire to be these things rather than actually being them. I suppose, though, poetry is often longing for something. Good work overall.
Short Story / diane and the dark
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Poetry / ANGEL BY MYSIDE
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It is clear you have a plot and a direction with the story, but so far it seems to lack any depth. The narrative and dialogue are vague and really don't keep you hooked and wanting to know more. I think the only thing you have working in your favor here is the fact that people will want to know what's in the shed, but once you get there the imagination has filled the void and there isn't much left to keep the reader wanting more. You seem like you took a fast pace with this, which isn't alwa...
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Short Story / diane and the dark
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