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Psst. Can you keep a secret? Nay? Well, I'll tell it to you anyway, At least than, maybe, these thoughts won't any longer feel heavy as stone Maybe than I won't feel so alone in my wandering, endlessly pondering. I've been restless as of late. I'll go to bed, get back up, check Myspace, masturbate, Eat a late night snack, and atempt sleep again. Only to awaken an hour or so later for the cycle to begin yet again. So here I am. I can keep a secret. I won't tell a soul, So if theres anything yo...
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It was one of those...I can't think of the word for it...moments The kind that blindside you, and kill your buzz. "Are you sitting down" She asked "Mom, what's wrong?" "You should be siting down." she said. As I took my seat, The worst case scenario played itself out in my head. I immediate conclusion was that Grandma was dead. She was old. She'd been sick. Everyone knew this, I had expected it. This was one of those unexpected epiphany-like moments. One for which I could not have prepared fo...
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Orphaned on my doorstep this morning In a box with a small white towel wrapped around it Was a small kitten White with tiny black ears and beady blue eyes The cutest little thing Abandoned and afraid She couldn't have been more than a few weeks old. She probably missed her mother And was alone for the first time in her life I took her in because I know that feeling Being left on your own, still trying to make sense of life I too had been abandoned at the doorsteps of the real world Left to ve...
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Once upon a dream, I was walking in the woods And came across a creek Whose water did not run from me. Nor I from it (which is what usually happens) instead it splashed with a smile, invigoratingly And spoke to me It said, "Embrace me, Touch me, Feel me, Taste me, Jump in me, Swim within me, And love me in this moment." "For I will not be here for everlong, And Someday soon I maybe gone, So embrace me Touch me, Feel me, Taste me. And love me, In this moment." "You only have one hundred years ...
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I leave behind my essence For you to take, or let be. But know if you take what you see, And compare it to your heart's point of view, That it has become a part of you, And you have unknowingly joined me, In this web of poetry. Where the inter-woven lines Are made up of Whens and wheres, Hows and whos, Mes,Is, Wes,theirs, and yous. Those who choose force, Those forced to choose. Questions, and answers Questionable answers, And unanswerable questions. Oh! What wicked web we weave, When first w...
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This poem is amazing, I'm favoriting it! Heres why: The beginning hooked me immediately, catching my intrest,and slowly revealed the disbility of the narrator in such a smooth way. I also loved how you covered a wide range of emotion in this poem. It starts making you feel bad for him, and by the end of the poem your happy almost sitting there with him watching the lazer light and the puppy jumping for it. It made me smile. Amazing write. Keep up the awesome.
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I love it. Maybe its because I get the get the same feeling when trying to write any structured poetry, such as a haiku. It manifests that inner rage we all have towards writing in structure. And all without breaking the spirit of the Haiku. This was very well written and funny. I rather enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it.
Interesting piece. It stirs the mind up. nice use of the word "discombobulating", vary creative. I do think numbered stanzas would work better with a longer piece, but ti works well with this one. Thats about all I have to say about that.
Woah. Innuendo much? It's well written. Short and to the point. I'm not quite sure if i like this particular subject matter handled in such a short, direct, in your face, sort of way. It's almost intimidating and demoralizing, that is if yone's mind assumes you are referring to sex. I did like how the poem has sort of a double meaning behind it. In a way the only thing hat makes it dirty is the reader. I find hat interesting. All in all, I think it could be longer. Theres a lot of untapped po...
Beautifully written. I found nothing bad about this poem. I like the imagery and the subject matter was very touching, this poem had the potential to be really cliche, but you managed to make it powerful and original. Wonderful piece.
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