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AGE: 39
LOC: Bangladesh
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 12

Hi! I am Shabbir Ahsan from Bangladesh. I like to read a lot and write as well. I have just completed my first novel The Peacekeeper (90,000 word count) and will publish soon. I have plans for my next three books banging inside my head right now! Will post chapters from my book here for review.

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My Sunshine, I have been happy with small little things in life. But when I got you, I was struck by such a wild sensation that I was taken aback. This is not a momentary surprise and I will take my whole life to understand it, bit by bit, in my days and nights and as I slowly discover the nature of emotion I am so beautifully enclosed within, I find a new me that I had no idea existed. I am still happy with simple things but with you my expectations are running so high that it is going thru ...
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This is a story about how my career was ruined by a stupid monkey. After serving nineteen long years in Bangladesh Army, without missing office, PT and games for a single day, without missing any Physical Efficiency Test (without passing though), without skipping any exercise, my long-built career was shattered—shattered by a stupid red-faced monkey. The incident took place in a city called Comilla. I was standing under the shades of few trees beside our PT ground. The weather was good, my mi...
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Humor/Satire / How I Lost My Virginity!
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Read a sad story of my life below--a story where I lost my virginity! ************ I, along with all the others, regret going thru the training at the Military Academy (BMA). The underlying reason behind my hatred of my two years at BMA is but little known to the world outside. I kept the knowledge inside of me for far too long and now it has grown to a monstrous proportion and is threatening to come out of my memory. So, I stroke a truce with my soul and decided to let you know of the ordea...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Chapter Three: Solitude
I was not very much into sci-fi genre but your story was something that i really adored. the setting was perfect as well as the characterization. you could improve the dialogues a bit though many of the readers would probably disagree with me. What about twisting the plot a little more by an explosive introduction. Your note to readers should also tell what we are going to read. What ya think? Great writing. Amaze us, more.
Novel Treatments / Chapter Two: Sarah
Wow! Giving you a 9 in all the categories. I loved the story from the beginning till the end. The language is bold, a little too much i would say. However, it surely added spices to the whole episode. I would love to see the story merges into a lager episode--like a soap opera or a romantic movie. Do you have plans for the same. Anyways, great work. Keep on writing.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / The Self Discovery Of A Soloist
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