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AGE:
25
LOC: Taylor, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 09
LOC: Taylor, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 09
I have been writing my entire life, but recently have been inspired to venture into the horror genre by my best friend Jase Aka CREEPSHOW. I love writing stuff that is outside my particular comfort zone, it is pretty intense when you start using your imagination to create things that scare even you.
Basically, I’m new at this and would like some input from some people outside my current circle of friends!
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You were just a tourist Stopping by, to take a look into my world. You stole a glimpse, into my reality Only to walk away. You took a photo, To capture my memories. Only to burn the evidence. You wrote a song, About the love I had, Only to forget the lyrics. You were just a tourist, Stopping by, Only to forget your destination ever existed.
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She is sitting there in her in her little black dress stained with cum and she isn’t wearing any panties. As she takes a sip from her beer she closes her eyes and for just a second she forgets how she got here, forgot who she was. If only her memory loss were permanent maybe she could start over, be somebody else. Sadly, what you see is what you get and this is her reality. She got tired of wishing for her dreams to come true. She got tired of chasing after something that doesn’t exist. She ...
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Its four a.m. and my hands won't stop shaking. I don't know if it's the whiskey or the fact that I'm holding a loaded gun to my head. Who knew suicide could be so nerve-racking? When you decide to end it all, shouldn't that should be the end of your problems? For me, it was just the beginning. In a world where I didn't have control over anything this would be my final attempt to prove that I am calling the shots now. B A N G B A N G I fired one shot at the bottle of whiskey for one last laugh...
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I LAY HERE BATTERED AND BRUISED, IN A ROOM I HAVE NEVER BEEN IN BEFORE. I HAVE NO MEMORY OF MY LIFE PRIOR TO THIS. I DONT KNOW WHO I AM OR HOW I GOT HERE. IM GUESSING FROM THESE HUGE SURGICALLY ENHANCED PAIR OF TITS ON MY CHEST, I MUST BE A PORN STAR. IT SEEMS FITTING CONSIDERING THIS LONG BLOND HAIR THAT IS LOOSELY FALLING OVER MY SCARED SHOULDERS. I FEEL ALONG THE CURVES OF MY BODY. I HAVE THE FIGURE OF A GIRL IN HER EARLY TWENTYS. IN THIS MOMENT I SHOULD FEEL FEAR. INSTEAD A SMIRK EXTENDS ...
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I do not know if this is publishable as is, but I do want to let you know I admire the message. The last line had a lot of impact on me. I think that if you were to add to it, and maybe have some "hidden meaning" lines or metaphors it would be really cool.
This was so sexy and intoxicating. The 3rd line was out of this world. You are amazing. I love the way you draw me and seduce me.
I love it! When I read a quote this good it always leaves me wanting more from the author because I know they can produce some genius thought on paper. I love how you can illustrate a point in so few words. This is Great! Would love to quote you on this one!!
I have to state for the record that this poem contains some of the most brilliant words ever written "That was written in truth for the moment Which is a lie for all time" This Opened a door for me. This is something that my heart can identify with. I love how other peoples words can sometimes be our own, and this is what this particular piece was for me. This is BRILLIANT.
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