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AGE:
19
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 22
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 22
lol, I have an extreme case of Man Face sometimes.
I’m extremely iffy about posting anything on here. I’d rather not have my work stolen or something of the sort.
I really would like a little feed back on what I have written though.
Wow. so all I got to say is, I call them like I see them. If I offend that isn’t my intention and if you don’t like something I’ve said I’m sorry, but it’s going to happen from time to time, no need to attack people for it.
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I highly enjoyed this. I don't really get poetry most of the time, or I'm just too picky about it. But I felt I could relate to this a bit more. Good job.
Legitimate Question, are all of the extra ‘S’s necessary? I think the word "hissed" and the description kind of gets the point across...Though this isn't my favorite form of writing so I could be a bit off in my assumption. I just think it makes it a little hard to read.
...I'm kind of sad to say, I didn't really get it... They're kids right? How do elementary schoolers manage to earn $2300 in one day, even hustling a few games, no kid would ever find enough elementary schoolers with enough money to get that much... Unless you meant for it to be like the kid was exaggerating, but I still think it needs a little clearing up. It could just be me though.
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