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AGE:
19
LOC: Bronx, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 11
LOC: Bronx, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 11
My name is Nefertiti and I’m a teenage girl from the Bronx.
My very best friend Samantha is on here too she’s sultrypoet.
Anyway, if anyone actually takes the time to read my poetry you will come to find that I rhyme in every single poem purposefully.
I guess that’s mostly because I’m in love with words like that and I do spoken word, which is also why my poetry sometimes may not look right written.
The reason for TragicMagic is due to the fact that I have all these words in me that express my true feelings and I feel the need to find
“magic” words; words that can truly convey everything I feel. But I tend to be at a lost for these words when it’s time to speak them aloud to the ones that truly need to hear them. That is the trage…
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Together we are, this imperfectly painted picture Forever we're scarred this perfectly tainted picture This picture deserves To be preserved in the reserved quiet it is kept But the more that we deny that it is kept The beauty it was made with will forever feel neglect The beauty it has grayed with will never stand erect The devastion is in dire need of amelioration But the deterioration seems way past restoration Yet I am ready to start at the foundation We founded The foundation we grounded...
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All I want to say, all I want to say can't even be compiled in these words. They can't even be mild or eased words. It's as if something bubbled up within, like something in me stirred. I feel this sudden urge to purge out all my feelings, after binging on the plights of the world and all it's other dealings, Cringing at the sight of truth, expecting any sign of healing. That is me on the inside, The me that has died, Being spread too far or too wide outside myself. Outside myself are empty v...
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I wanted to breeze through your hair And ease through the air, Without doubts, not one single care. I wanted to caress and bless Those tears on your face. I wanted to taste The sweetness in your eyes from a single embrace. But I have not a finger, to let lie and linger and lay upon you, And play upon you notes to a song that would stay upon you. I can move you but I have no grip. I can soothe you but you seem to slip through, As if you knew me and my plans from long ago, As if you remember th...
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So I guess the wind died down because the air is still and the night sky is clear and I know the moon is there, but the clouds seem to hide the Indigo moon. As I look outside my window, I search for the one thing that makes the picture perfect landscape richer. I cried into the pitch black darkness. I cried into my pillow. I cried into the night, hoping the wind would try to dry my eye. But it never did. Every night I crept toward the window sill, before I slept, to see if the wind still kept...
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Happiness is just an illusion that deflects reality.
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Your quote made me smile because there's a lot of truth to it, and it's simplicity makes it easy to understand with more to be understood.
I really like your poem. I can truly identify with the want to not feel. There's a lot of truth in what you say because I don't know how many times I have tried to be glacial. I like the simplicity of your poem; it's direct and to the point and you don't have to think too hard to find the meaning. Yet it does make one think. The steel frame came out of no where, but then again everything comes from some where,however far or distant it may be.
Remember when you told me this one over the phone? I teared up. I never told you that. I think you would know why. I like its simplicity because it is direct and understandable. But, I don't ever think I told you this, I think you should add more meat to the story sometimes because there's a lot more you can express and so many ways you can do it. Sometimes it seems rushed to get to the next line but maybe that's when I hear you say it or whatever. But this is really truly one of the ones I e...
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