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AGE: 19
LOC: Santa Rosa, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 18

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Poetry / Dad
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Dad, Now if you give me a minute I'll clear up the discrepancies And if you act like you care again I'll give you the recipe For the relationship where you get the best of me Not just what's left of me You see for a couple of years there, you left us Yeah you came to the same house to rest but Never in the right mind to notice trust Had kicked rocks faster than a Greyhound bus See you weren't worried about how my day went Or that the way you lived life made sure all extra money was spent You ...
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Young Adult / Dad
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Dad, Now if you give me a minute I'll clear up the discrepancies And if you act like you care again I'll give you the recipe For the relationship where you get the best of me Not just what's left of me You see for a couple of years there, you left us Yeah you came to the same house to rest but Never in the right mind to notice trust Had kicked rocks faster than a Greyhound bus See you weren't worried about how my day went Or that the way you lived life made sure all extra money was spent You ...
Poetry / Truth
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Livin life just for the "American dream" In America, where the truth is seldom seen And what I'm sayin isn't truth because I'm 17 So if truth is your dream, you better keep dreaming, because it'll probably never be seen Check the record because for the record you've all been cordially disrespected Interrupted and misdrected misused and abused Spit out only after being chewed So what makes you think the president gives a fuck whether you're a christian or jewish Truth is, if there was a god th...
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Keep it dumb They give it a chance Like "Oh this is fun, it makes me want to dance" But I can atleast trick 'em Make 'em think I'm degradin' like Sir and or Madam Could You Phathom Even Imagine The Reaction If you knew more than "I'm Sorry Miss Jackson" And tasteless Waistless fashion And I say waistless Meaning models are disgraces They took their pride and misplaced it Locked it up swallowed the key and forgot where they threw it up; WASTED Just like hundreds of years of fought oppression S...
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Poetry / Hidden Pride
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My People Out Here Gettin Whipped Yo' Pple Runnin Round Gettin Dipped Takin Tha Ice Out Our Mouths Is Like Takin Tha White Out Yo House Put Me N Chainz N Slap A Number On Me Caint Put Me In Slavery So To This You Confine Me A Prison In My Own Mind Life Movin So Fast I'm Thinkin I'm Runnin Outta Time But I Then Stop To Listen Ta Tha Children Wadin In Tha Water And Then I Know My UnderGround RailRoad Is Not Much Farther "Get Over It, That Was Over A Hundred Years Ago" But Theres A Reason For Yo...
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Poetry / american road
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Flash Fiction / Rebel
"If you're given ruled paper, write the opposite way" I like what you're saying, I just don't see it being in a magazine.
I'm not that good at being critical, but the poem was well written. I loved it. Keep it up.
Poetry / JOYOUS FAMILY
Poetry of true accounts, poetry with meaning and emotions is always the greatest. Keep writing!
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I love poems like this. There's so much emotion put into it that even if people didn't agree it would make them think. The flow was great too. It sounds like a personal account, and that also helps. Great poem!
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