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AGE: 28
LOC: Indianapolis, IN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 12

I am a single mother of four beautiful children. They are the reason for my existence. They are the most important people in my life and I strive daily for them. I have been through hell and back in my life. I have known alot of pain and inflicted plenty. My writing reflects alot of that. Trying to find the woman I left long ago to come full circle of healing. That at times seems very unatainable. Yet I will and prevail. These are my thoughts, feelings, pain, struggle, happiness all from inside my heart and life.

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Poetry / Misplaced
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54 Reviews   61 Comments
This is my pain that runs deep and long. Scars I am afraid will never be gone. Bleeding on the inside. My body is numb. "Oh God what have I done" "Come back!" The little girl inside screams "Why, Why have you left me?" Feelings are not the same. They are in a place I no longer stay. Changed. Is she forever gone? Unreachable. This mask is making a permanent home in my skin. My own sin. Slowly dying. Decaying in this place. I can no longer see her face.
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Poetry / Buried
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12 Reviews   5 Comments
Things are not what they seem. Close your eyes and listen to me. You can touch and feel this skin breathing on you, you cannot win. Playing closer to what I've done. I am no longer what you have become. Open your eyes is she still here? No she is lost in older years. Buried inside that darkened tomb. Lost in the unopened room. Crying out please help me! You can't you can no longer see. The frustration it holds me down buried deep in the ground. Leave me that is what you've done. I am no longe...
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Poetry / You will never be alone.
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55 Reviews   58 Comments
Lord bless my children. I ask you this they are precious and innocent. Blinded to the world for only a short time. They won't always be mine. Guide them slow and steady through this life. For one day it could be rocky and unkind. I can't always be there to catch them when they fall. To nurse their wounds when they cannot stand tall. Decisions will be theirs and right will not always prevail, and more than a dozen times they will fail. You Lord my maker my anchor through the rain. You have hel...
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Quotes / today
by pigpin
I like this piece and where you are going with it. I think it needs some rewording it just seems similiar to something I have read before.
Quotes / the truth is in the silence ( six word memoir)
by Monty1
I cannot count the times I have thought this. These few words mean so many things. We are our own worst critics and our thoughts convey that and betray us at times. This is my new fav! Thanks for sharing!
Quotes / MADNESS
by pigpin
Loved this! Sometimes mine does though just in different ways. So I guess this quote would be true! Makes you think and smile!
Quotes / 6 word quote....
by cooljim102055
How true! I like this quote it is inspirational. Amazing how few words will invoke such thought!
Quotes / Five
by kelmo
Wow! Oh how many times I have thought of this. Mainly when I look at my children I will have these thoughts. Very well written although long for a quote but good nontheless.
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