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AGE:
23
LOC: Bayonne, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 15
LOC: Bayonne, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 15
My name is Adam and I consider myself a fairly average 22 year old out of Bayonne, NJ. I have worked in the media field for most of my life via TV and Audio. I am currently starting a DJ company from scratch and it seems to already be paying off! I hope you guys enjoy my poetry!
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Deep in the woods on the darkest of nights, You here a scream which gives you a fright, Thumping around as fast as can be, So very dark you can't even see. You go for a walk to see what's about, While you walk you mind has it doubts, And you get closer another scream is heard, Not quite a man, bear, cat or bird. Your heart starts to race the closer you get, So freakin scared your panties get wet, You keep moving on to your own dismay, You wonder to yourself if you will die today. As you get ...
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Dark in the shadows, Is where we begin, Adam and Eve's next of Kin, The story your never learned before today, The Start of the Earth's human dismay, It Starts with murder in the garden of Eden, Which came as result of a nasty beating, Kane was hungray with nothing to eat, He thought Able could be tasty meat, As time went by the hunger arose, Able started to suspect, So Kane stayed composed, Days went by and daylight came and went, Kane couldn't resist that human scent, Able started to notice...
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Alone in the woods one dreary night, Only one little star shining bright, I walk down a path only to find, Anger and madness controlling my mind, What must I do to center my soul, How can I get out of this deep dark hole, Am I sick or demented in my head, Is it even worth getting out of bed, No one to listen when I need it most, Sometimes I feel as alone as a ghost, Tearing me apart from the inside out, My fire is burning over this internal bout, Apon this stroll through the woods, I thought...
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I have to say I have nothing against this poem! I think it is Terrific and God how I love Bryan Adams! I also like your use of time. It is quite fitting. It is also very relate able to those of the ages 16 - 30 I think!
Wow I think it is quite nice. As I also sometimes use biblical references I can totally get it! Short and to the point. I think the message it conveys is that no matter how sweet you are actions can speak loud, in a broad sense anyway! Very Nice!
To an Experienced Poet you work is simply magnificent. I must say I truly feel that your everyday working men and women might get lost in your in depth descriptions just a little bit. I definitely think with out a shadow of a doubt that this poem will get you far.
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