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AGE: 25
LOC: Milford, NH
GEN: Male
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Romance / The Meeting
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She suddenly awoke with a startle. She stood up in bed and looked around the room. It took her a minute but she quickly recognized her dorm room and calmed down. “What an awful dream”, she thought to herself. She glanced over at the armoire and looked at her clock. 2:30 am and she was wide awake. She had the dream to blame for that. Pulling the warm comforter up past her shoulders and up to her neck she laid back down. Trying to fall asleep was impossible. She kept thinking of her...
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Romance / I Trusted You
I would take out the second taste right before deceit and words right before said without heart. Other than that it looks good.
I think its a great premise for a story. I would try to keep the troubles in her past kinda of hidden so theres some kind of suspense or anxiety about what was so terrible. This could also cause conflict with thier relationship with her inability to open up to him or something.
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