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LOC: United States
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LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 11
I’m an 18 year old cursed by the love of absorption and creation. I write essays, fiction, and poetry.
And for Urbis, that is all you need to know.
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Timothy Ross English 1510 Tara Hendin November 30, 2007 Death by Degrees Self-inflicted violence is a new and mostly unrecognized epidemic of our times. It deeply permeates certain areas of youth culture and creates physical and emotional scars that will have far reaching consequences on millions of Americans for the rest of their lives. What exactly is self-inflicted violence, and who suffers from it? What is the true nature of this abuse within the individual, and how might it be helped? Ac...
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Death by Degrees Self-inflicted violence is a new and mostly unrecognized epidemic of our times. It deeply permeates youth culture and creates physical and emotional scars that will have far reaching consequences on millions of Americans for the rest of their lives. What is self-inflicted violence? Why has such a strange and harmful thing become so widespread? How do we stop it? This report will address these questions, and primarily focus on the true nature of this abuse within the individua...
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I picked up a banjo and was enlightened. Plan A for my future life crashed and burned. Plan B quickly followed with a neat little tailspin at the end. Plans C-Z do not exist. Cling to that banjo, Timothy, cling to it. Amen. The banjo is now gone, so I must instead cling to myself. Ah, what poor company I make! Therefore, I will compose a poem, and I will call it The Tree: -One thing of beauty can I see--not of Earth, or of me -not of sun, rather, a collection of the three. -In that glass, tha...
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I wake up when they tell me to wake up. This is one thing that I have trouble with. How do they know when I am to wake up? How do they know when is time to sleep, and when is time to work? It seems very random. In my childhood, I slept when I did and woke when I did. This way seems…forced. Unnatural. I said this once, and I was struck very hard for it. They said that I was to forget the old ways, and forget that I had ever lived in them. I suppose they are right; all in all, it is a good way...
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My head rests on the desk. I've already made a mistake--I am not resting. There is no rest here. My head is lying on the desk. Yes; lying. That word denotes the correct connotation. My head is lying on the desk in signification of my total cognitive surrender. This is not my desk. The begrimed grooves of adolescent territorial markings have changed. The cleaning people must have switched them. Why they do is a great mystery of life. I suspect two things: that the cleaning people live bright, ...
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What interested me most about this was the odd relationship between the narrator and Kevin. I would recommend toning down the raw violence and making it more surreal. who is Kevin and how does he control these women? you have the narrator call him "master," and make it clear that she doesn't really know much about him; yet still, she respects him (or did, till she saw the other woman). how did she escape her room, or wherever she was being held? answer some of the questions, and play that out...
excellent work. I didn't actually plan on reading this--I just clicked on it in vague curiosity, but I ended up reading the entire thing. that alone says something for it's attractive value. It starts very strong and gets the attention. It languishes a teeny bit in the middle, as he reflects. All of the paragraphs are spot on--but maybe one or two of them could be made more concise and attached to each other. another thing that bugged me a little bit is the fact that I never actually KNEW wha...
I'm not sure what the bona fide haiku system is, or whether or not you're following it. But it seems to me, the less words the better. Is the word "dead" truly necessary? I think you should consider getting rid of either "dead", or "reverently"--but not both.
Poetry is so subjective--this is about your life, and what I got from it could be utterly different; for example, the difference between "going with the world" and "following your feet." One seems conformist; the other seems individual. But they can coexist. "save my soul in the eyes of others" this was particularly important, as it could mean the most things. is it hiding yourself from people? or is it making people think you've agreed with them? or maybe it's more conformity (which isn't ne...
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