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LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 06
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 06
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the creativity began, the productivity ended.
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gazelles, before I realised it I was surrounded by them. screaming in their crazy foreign lingo at me, preacher feathers and selling sticks with chestnuts. but not to the surprise of the crowd, no, they were expecting it unlike us poor bastards, they knew the rules, they just felt it absolutely necessary not to inform us about the strange local dance. meanwhile the major trip was still forming, as the back rooms were filled with the mists of the dazed and the swarms of innocently confused ran...
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Always on the edges of perception, Elusive, alluring. I want you and You always seem to be just out of reach, Always just where I cannot quite see you. You hide your face from me, Yet I see your hand in action. I feel your breath on my neck and Hear the sound of your breathing. I turn around to see you there, always In the shadows. I try to follow, ever So close yet never getting near. Just a glimpse, a flicker of light, Laughter in the distance. I cannot see you, I have not touched you And I...
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A pawn is moved The first Haiku is written The player weeps
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There is no man without Demons, Nor Demonic entities with earthly Proportions Without trace of man.
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I certainly agree with the sentiment behind this entire piece, even the American soldiers who fought in the Vietnam War got the bad end of an already harsh stick when their government refused to recognize them as veterans. This piece of journalism for me seemed to illustrate the reality of all wars as being morally abhorrent while managing to emphasize the detestable particularities of the Vietnam War. The only thing that detracts from this kind of writing on the topic is the shear volume of ...
I did enjoyed the piece as a whole although I did not like the way that it was set out in short lines all of different sizes. At the start the lines were randomly set as though you had hit the space bar to start a new line at odd moments, ending up with some lines that were six or seven words long and even a line consisting of one word. I know that this may seem something somewhat insignificant to criticize although I did find that towards the second half of the poem the lines became more fle...
Yes indeed, that about manages to sum up the most memorable moment that comes to my mind from throughout my entire writing history (not that long). The only thing that I would change is bummer to disaster, merely because my own experiences of losing a lot of work in one moment have been just that, a disaster rather than something mildly irritating.
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