Wade's profile
AGE:
32
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 22
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 22
Well my name is Wade I’m 32 years young, i,ve been writing poetry for about two years now although I did write a couple when in my early twenties. Only recently picked it up again. I’m also working on a book and have wrote the first 15,000 words, it’s hard to describe the content of the book, it’s fiction and the best way I can think of describing it is the davinci code meets the matrix. It will be the first of a trilogy. I love to be around people so it’s slow going, it’s the picking up of the laptop I have a problem with, once I start I get on a role and can be really productive; That’s the beauty of poetry by comparison, you only need a few minutes alone to think…
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I sat down on the comfortable leather of my proud throne, which was positioned squarely opposite the wide screen TV I’d bought at the same time, earlier that year to enhance my viewing pleasure. I was ready and looking forward to watching the latest episode of Hugh Laurey’s “House”, I‘d recorded from the night before. The living room had become redolent of a busy Friday night kebab shop; I had taken the liberty of visiting one, on the way home from work. The aroma from it, that was being pro...
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I’ve been here before a shadow from a crooked tree distorted and contorted by a restless sun and once a rotting leaf unfurled by a muddy boot, the left while on the run I was a stench once methane rising toxically from a primordial soup that’s how I begun last time a wilder beast always on the lookout those bloody lions they kill for fun this time the most grotesque my silhouette the form of man a hopeless dun!
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For the time lock away religion, its verse often misunderstood And educate the people its intentions always good. Melt down all the weapons for wheelchairs, limbs for the lamed. Reassess the futility of war the loser always blamed. Wash away the narcissism in modern mankind’s quest Shun a culture of paparazzi their talents, not impressed Be careful of conflict diamonds their sparkle bathed in blood With regards to a gift of affection they’re simple not very good Spend more time with family, a...
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There is a long journey in this heart. The distance a million miles back to the start and the weight I've carried for so long would break a man twice as strong. I know life is no fairytale or fantasy and if my path is to be full of negativity then in defiance I have this to say the road we take we may not choose but as long as we walk it we never lose. We take comfort in the happiness we give This is my vow, the way I live and to the misery I say, more weight.
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My heart is like the Ocean as it feverishly yearns for land a quest for true emotion held in an embracing hand. My heart is like the Ocean At times calm and in tranquillity Then magnetic with compulsion Pulled towards its polarity. My heart is like the Ocean At the will of a higher power For love cannot be chosen But destined as bee to flower My heart is like the ocean Obdurate in its devotion.
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Where all I want is to wear that wedding gown. I couldn't stop laughing after reading that sentence, I can empathize with the feeling and sentiment in the poem and in parts it is very heart felt I can't really relate to the subject matter I've never had to hide who I am so can't imagine what that's like the construct of your poem is well presented and it flows well definitely reader friendly and I'm sure many viewers will appreciate the content more than me well done.
I sorry I just don't get this at all or am able to relate any experience to it maybe you should have helped out a little with notes for the reviewer.
This chapter is really heart warming, pulls at those so called heart strings. There are a few typos in it eg He’s planned (he) whole future around it. Going to USC. You may want to read over it again there are about six or seven. Again you set the atmosphere very well. You have kept the anticipation level up well, you can tell their passion for each other is boiling over but at the same time you have developed the readers attachment to the characters and there seemingly innocent none agenda l...
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