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LOC: Minneapolis, MN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 17
LOC: Minneapolis, MN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 17
I’m a new horror writer that loves to have his work out somewhere. I’m here to meet and possibly network with other writers. If you have other questions please E-mail me and i promise i will give you a response.
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Paul was very unhappy for a majority of his life. In fact he was so accustomed to feeling miserable that any other feeling felt almost alien to him. The only thing in his life that brought relief was doing his job, driving trains. He remembered being a boy and spending his summers on the tracks riding around with his father. He loved the guys his dad worked with, he loved the smell of the engine when he would first get off and he loved the sound of the wheels running along the track. The thin...
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Father stood over a lifeless and ruined landscape. The memory of his greatest creation’s ruination brought tears to his eyes. It wasn’t supposed to be like this, not this time. Now the planet floats once again as a shattered life force. Father sat down on a scorched stump and wept. Gaia came over and put her arm around Father attempting to comfort him. “Hey… Father you tried your best” “I know,” he said through his cries. “You knew they were almost certainly a doomed life form right from the ...
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I am old; I’ve existed for so long I can’t even remember where it all started. I was here long before Father Time wrote the first words in his endless book. I taught Death how to send his first soul through the great loop. I raised Mother Earth from infancy into womanhood. When she bore her daughter Gaia I helped her plant the stream of life. But I’m tired; it’s hard living so long. I know that one day it might end. I’ll be ready long before that day reaches me. I’ll be around long after the ...
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I remember the way it all started almost ten years ago. It seems almost yesterday that I was attending my high school graduation Class of 2012. When the North Pole split in two. That was when the old one escaped from his prison. When nightfall fell over the planet. At first no one knew what had caused the great split in the pole but everything seemed to be fine. No great rises in temperature or the earth’s magnetics. The experts of the world agreed that it was just a fluke and they would prob...
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What is it about daylight that quells men’s fears? Do they believe that the sun will actually protect them? Is killing the enemy any different during the day. Do they deal with the possibility of death easier in the day? Well I really don’t give a damn we attack the Germans at midnight tonight. For Christ sakes they’re only lightly armed officers and totally unaware. They seemed to be more concerned with the affections of a waitress. However when I look into the men’s faces you’d think I just...
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I liked this story but it's kinda ruff around the edges. This story is told from the POV of a ten year old. In my childhood at ten there was still a stric division of girls and boys. Everyone started to like each other when they turned eleven or twelve. It's very well written My advice to you is to sit down and re-write this. Wirk it over a couple of times and this good story could be great best of luck to you. Dave
I'm not really sure what in the hell to make of this. This reads like someone wrote down several ideas for several stories. My idea for this would be take all these ideas contained in this peice and put them in a collection and call the collection Everything has a Story just a thought Dave
I would like the first thing i say to be this this story does have something there. My next point if allowed to be perfectly candid is what the hell is going on?! You said in your directions that you'd like to publish it here's my advice for that. 1 Explain why the floors and staring into the sky are so improtant. 2 Explain in a little or a lot (your choice) of detail Frank and Maury 3 Explain the profit margins and is there bussiness going under or what. 4 At the end decided is Maurry going ...
I just really liked this story. I like the candy bar charecter names. I liked how you killed snickers. I didn;t find any gramatical errors. I couldn't find anything to improve Good Job! Dave
This is actually a really funny story i espcially like the way it starts by have a werewolf take a dump in someones yard. And everything else has a nice comic feel works. I think a re-write is in order because i think the ending needs another paragrah for the transfomation just an idea Best luck in the future Dave
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