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AGE: 19
LOC: Alexandria, LA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 27

Wassup Urbis, my name is Marcus, I’m a 17 year old High School student with a passion for poetry. Right now I have 118 poems that I’ve written about my experiences throughout my life, my high school experiences, and what I’ve seen happen around me. I would love to have feedback on my writing and style from anyone, because both the negative and positive will help me grow, so read my stuff and I got U too.

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Quotes / My 6 Word Memoir
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I Am A Masterpiece In Progress
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Poetry / The Drops
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Hope Today
 Tomorrow Forecast
 ... Showers Of The Rumbling Sort
 Down From The Heavens...
 The Ground Breaking The Fall Of The Drops.
 The Thunder Rumbles To A Murmur,
 The Drops Dampen The Clouds.
 Alone Are The Drops, Single And Momentary.
 Darkness Now The Light;
 Of The White Windows Run.
 Alone I Reside Once More.
 The Drops Now Fewer...
 The White Windows Clearing...
 The Clouds Shall Soon Disappear.
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The Rain Could Come And Melt Away The Rooftops And The Streets Could Turn To Islands Floating By And Yet Every Time We See Eye To Eye The Walls Around Us Disappear And My Heart Stops Like Shoe Strings That Never Untie We Could Revert Back To Infancy All Law Could End Of Piracy And While The Rest Riot Around Us We'll Walk Into Eternity Hand And Hand Love Our Only Logic The World Around Us Could Fuss And Fight, Roses Will Blossom And We May Not Always Agree On Every Topic Love Is Our Reason, Lo...
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Through Your Eyes, I See Only Your Hearts' Desire. Passions Of A Blazing Fire ... Within Are All Of The Rules Our Love Defies. Never Again Will The Lips Of A Liar Embrace Those Of Sweet Grandeur In A Kiss ... So Taste My Softest Touch And Reminisce Upon My Latest Journey Through Our Personal Separation And Into Our Collision As One. Through Time You've Grown To See The Absolute Deepness Of My Admiration. Love Like No Other Has Done. And Though Time Shall Fade My Love Shall Never Expire!
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Poetry / Fade Away
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Ahhhh........ my heart stops racing, my hands stop shaking, and....I......relax. A release of pressure. A release of anticipation. The truth finally revealed, today finally come. Love is my most powerful emotion. Love is the most I can possibly ever give. Love is the gift wanted to give to you. Love is what you shied away from. Yet that love is always here. I do admit my methods are different, maybe even odd but those who care the most are those you keep around. No matter the differences of S...
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i wish i new more but it leaves so much to the imagination as well
Short Story / six word story
it feels like one of those take it or leave it situations....u work as tirelessly as possible but in the end its still not good enough....but s short sweet and to the point
Short Story / Six Words Exactly
It sounds like a riddle, lol, but seriously to me it feels like a theme to life through any issues that may come that they will psss
Short Story / My 6 word memoir
i like it because it makes u ponder everything that has ever happened to u and wonder, wat would have happened if i had done this or that, i like
Short Story / The Singer
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