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AGE:
37
LOC: Erlanger, KY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 20
LOC: Erlanger, KY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 20
I write science fiction and fantasy, and I often merge the two, not because I don’t know the difference, but because I enjoy the play of contrasts and because I disagree strongly with some of the so-called rules concerning where the dividing line is. Fantasy is not incompatible with high technology, nor are “rockets, robots and ray guns” necessary for a science fiction story. And don’t get me started on Niven’s Fifth Law, which is so full of false assumptions that it’s laughable.
I used to have a few of my short stories and story fragments on Urbis, but I have removed them because I am working on a novel that is connected to some (or most, or all) of those stories, and I don’t want to ruin the surprise. :)
As for how I r…
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"his father mother" - "father's mother" "to tell be" - "to tell me" comma after "four hours" no single quotes around "X" - capitalize comma after "that I was one" "Though, I had never" - no comma comma after "jewelry off" "I had woke up" - "I had woken up" comma after "In all my life" semicolon or period, not comma, after "that lived that life" "seemed skew" - "skewed" comma after "during my musings" "sun had rose" - "sun had risen" comma after "I was concerned" "My mothers’ voice" - "my moth...
don't need quotes around DELAYED "Gentleman’s Quarterly" - italicize (title of magazine) "membership to the mile-high club" - "membership in" "what he considered--not just a complication—but a major fuck-up" - no dashes "New York Times" - italicze no comma after "but actually" "its once neat twist" - "once-neat" no comma after "Tennessee hills farm" "wider world—which, up to now—she’d read about only in books" - "wider world which - up to now - she'd only read about in books" "_In_ fact, she'...
"dessert fields" - "desert" period, not colon, after "to drink from" "lied there inanimate" - "lay" comma after "found you" no comma after "in my arms" comma, not semicolon, after "into my eyes" It's not a story, but it is an interesting scene. I can imagine it as part of a dream sequence or even as a story set in a place where these things (demise of the sun, bedlam in the twilight) are literally true. I don't think it is publishable as it is, nor are you likely to find an agent or publisher...
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