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I don't know if I would have titled it In This Forest because you mostly speak of feelings. I did like this part because you were discribing the forest. Walking through this forest the leaves are dry The drips of rain surround Slowing steps and wretched words echo All is lost in this place This forest See how this part doesn't show mean to the place, the forest. Can't get you out of my mind Your existence is a mystery to me Your thoughts unending Your actions so incomprehensible Example: I wa...

I really enjoyed reading your lyrics for "Prey". It was well written, it gets the message across and the story your telling. Well done! One note of advice in the area: NOTES FOR REVIEWER The creator of this item has not left any specific reviewer instructions. You might want to leave a message of what type of genre your lyrics fall under. Rock, pop, metal, melody this will help the reviewer determine the lyrics flow easier. I look forward to reading more of your works.

If debate is what you want I can give you that. I think there is some truth in what you're saying. But, as a writer I have to believe that I get my pauses in place and me tone across in how I write. I'm new so I'll try to figure out how to message you but didn't you just say you had a ton of stuff you haven't even looked at? Hard to debate with someone who won't read, don't you think? Interesting topic for debate.

I really enjoyed reading your poem " The Forever Song ". I did notice a few things you might want to watch. You Capitalized the S in (Play that eternal Song with me.) A simple mispell of ecstacy. ecstasy is the dictionary spelling. I make those mistakes as well. Nothing big! Other than that I really look forward to reading more of your work. Nicely done.