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AGE:
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LOC: Bayonne, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 24
LOC: Bayonne, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 24
I’m an artist who is inspired by the world. I am a musician, a writer, a person. I am an artist.
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Where the hell do you get off? Calling me crazy, insane, mad… Where do you get the hell off? How did you get to this plateau in my life? How’d you gain this magical right? The ability to call me foolish and crazy? This isn’t supposed to be yours; And somehow you made it so. You grabbed a piece of my soul when I wasn’t looking. Then you replaced this piece with a shard of your heart. And now I ache because you call me a lunatic. I’d support you in your...
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There were words and voices speaking. Then an argument of pride; Such foolish vices. Yes, I remember what you said way back when. I recall those words before our childish spat And they carried a heavy weight that I was prepared to take. I meant them full and true and nothing you can think would make them mean nothing to you. You probably want me to miss you and not need you So I do nothing while I sit on the kitchen floor in tears from the day you left. I no longer see the world as her becaus...
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You say Don't love me and I cry inside. You tell me my heart will break if you hold it; but it's been your number one possession forever. Let the memories fade and slates be wiped clean. Kiss her, don't kiss her... What does he - what do you tell yourself? You know how she feels and you know I don't care. Maybe I'm broken, defected. I can only love, for no ounce of hate resides in me. And for that, I'm faulty. I tire of writing poetry. Perhaps I will retire early, become a young...
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How dare I have the heart to call you, but not the courage to say what I've wanted to say what I mean? And these things traversing through my mind give a subtle reminder of why I don't die now... Yes, I've been dead for quite some time, save that moment when - the exception and - it was ruined. You breathed life into me, gsve me fulfillmet; reminded me of what joy meant, but here is the regret. You were no fool, just within your heart true. I was a coward, and to this day it's ...
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You're so ugly that you're beautiful and so beautiful that you're ugly; but either way I love you, so living with you is heavenly. You're so ugly that you're beautiful and so beautiful that your ugly; but either way I love you, so hearing you is healthy. You're so ugly that you're beautiful and so beautiful that your ugly; but either way I love you, so seeing you is costly. You're so beautiful that you're ugly and so ugly that you're beautiful; but either way I love you, ...
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I enjoyed this very much. It was humorous without being too... plain. The details were clear cut; but vague at the same time. It was the basic outline for opposites attract; people date; and people... "mate". The two characters were described in a pleasant; but still humorous manner. It was clean humor... end of story. And I'd buy you a toaster if I could.
66.6667% Review Quality (3 Votes)
From beginning to end, you painted the emotions of the parents in a very clear cut manner. I really appreciated, as a reader, how you made it clear that Max could be someone - in his time. But time outgrew him and he no longer had a chance in society by the end of your drabble. That is quite hard hitting and completely connects your work to the topic you wrote it for.
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I like the usage of biblical characters for your drabble. It gives the reader the great idea that this doctor is indeed trying to play god; but ultimately fails. Considering the end (Mary’s abdomen swells like the whale that swallowed Jonah, blood gushing forth like the waters of the great flood.), this conception was a failed procedure. If you were aiming to give a negative connotation to genetic experimentation, you have definitely done it here.
Extremely well written. People have difficulty writing to a word a limit; especially short ones like this. You made it clear that there were opposing forces; the bio-soldiers being the "bad side" and the humans being the "good side". The unnamed husband can be assumed to be the protagonist in this short tale. With so few words to work with, you gave a great amount of detail; which was great! I certainly hope to read more of your work. Keep it up!
I like how unlike most other haiku I have read, this isn't too vague. It's understood what's happening; but the tinge of emotion seems to be missing. Beautiful none-the-less.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
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