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AGE: 18
LOC: Western Springs, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 07

Hey I really don’t know a ton about this site my friend just recently told me to join…so yeah. >.<

Wow, so many people are reviewing all my things. Thanks to you all I am truly blessed.

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Poetry / Can't I...
Version 3
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Can't I try and protect you? I have never fallen this low before The one whom I trusted the most About whom I always would boast Walks away from me, covered Now not in dirt but blood I walked away as you lay there No emotion upon my face at first Then as my back turned to face you A small smirk grew but only for an instance The begining steps I take are light Yet the further away I move the heavier they become My heart starts to sink deeper into my chest The crule smirk I wore is now a mask a...
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Poetry / Frustration
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Push me away But still draw me close Wrap your arms around me Yet don't touch me Be an illusion only I can see However get out of my head Stop trying to be what I need Because it already is simply you Let me fly on my own Don't forget to catch me when I fall Sometimes when I'm with you my mind I can't make up The frustration just seems to take up All of me I want you close As well as gone I want you seen Just by me I want you here But only if you promise to continue to Make my world continue ...
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Poetry / Stale
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My world will come crashing down The brittle sounds it makes Stale air staining my lungs Yellow tape from condemned dreams I wish unfulfilled A dream never to be dreamt again I need to be free of this disgusting place Your whims I care nothing for Water is my world Sound its every breath Words the sweet sanctity of music But you and your harsh pen Cold black and blue My world means nothing to you Your beating heart long grown cold Life itself to me is the flow Something that you always interr...
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Poetry / Moving on
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The pain it is everywhere Stop, make it go away This time it is my fault How stupid do you get Let me go, please You caught me with your smile And kept me with my sins Have I not atoned Forgive this time I am setting my self free The pain that had washed over me No more of this insanity I will heal I will grow And this time I will learn and know That I make the choices I take the chances So no longer can you hold my lonely soul with your passing glances I am moving forward
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Poetry / Pardon me
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Pardon me for caring Wasting all my time Whenever you would fall who would catch you The tears that poured from your eyes who would dry them No longer is it I My wishful thinking there it lays Dead amongst the sand Where the waves of time roll over now and then Painful wounds I try to cover But bandages only sop up the bloody mess Closing my eyes, I see all the world around me No fair tales or dreams of what is to be A world that does not move can not fail Just as my heart pleads of me I want...
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Young Adult / Gifted, Ch. 5 Pt. 2
I really like how easily the characters flow in your story. I know that it can be a hard thing to do, creating such an easy within a story as well as continuing the story is hard to do. I comend you on a great concept so far and look forward to reading the rest of your work. Good luck.
Poetry / The Exception
Great! That was really well writen, it felt like we were just moving along and out of no where this emotion hits you and I could really relate to it. You have done an amazing job at capturing the abrubtness of how life happens. Good work!
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Children's / Monster Under The Bed
That was really cute. I could just picture their conversation back and forth. I liked this as a whole, good job.
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Children's / Why Me BumbleBee!?
This was adorable. I thought it was so well put together, everything rhyming. Well done!
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