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Turn your head, look left and right Just remember Your shadow is always in sight A shadow that will follow wherever you go A dark past you don't want anybody to know Hear your feet on the cold, black pavement The clapping of shoes deafening to your ears Faster Faster Faster Don't let people see your fear Don't let them taste your sweat of insecurity Hide in the dark until you are rid of the ghost Somebody coaxes you out Hearts beat, emotions rise Standing in the light caused by another Periph...
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The piece that was never searched for but somehow stumbled upon More priceless than the rarest gem; more powerful than hurricane winds A fluent translator for the complicated language accompanying my life A light shined on the path to make sure I don't miss a step or lose my place A key that fits perfectly in the door of my future My secret weapon to fight the long battles ahead A daily reminder of how blessed I am Sweet kisses to make my knees weak A guiding hand to keep me strong An earnest...
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No more Bourbon Street No more Mardi Gras A voodoo capital of the world Now under water And among ruins The end of the world Disease, starvation and murder Is this really an atrocity Or are we just desensitized to violence Will mankind find a new respect For the earth of which we have no control over Or find another way to take advantage of poverty. We can only be at the mercy of nature.
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Love me, hate me Or just entertain me Cuddle into bed at night Or talk until mornings light Leave me alone, but stay right here Tears come when your thougts are near Images replay on loops in my head Why was I so easily mislead? Welcome to reality and begin to prepare The world will always be full of despair Memories forgotten and photos torn This is where beginnings are born The first friend you ever lost Nothing can repay the cost Remember you are too good for this shit The truth was there ...
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Broken glass, broken bones...band-aids Helping you dig a hole, to bury the body letting you have the last of the kool-aid Ulcers A long day that finds you locked out of your house A key Bleeding red thoughts on your clean white sheets Holding hands on a beach, holding your head under water Holding my heart in your hand, to stop the bleeding Holding a knife in the other The big bang The apocalypse A mix-tape with all your favorite songs A letter with sloppy writing handed off between periods A...
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The beginning of the poem was slightly confusing to me. However, the more that I read, the more interesting the poem became. The rhythm became very distinct in the middle of the poem. Beautiful word usage. The overall concept of the poem intrigued me.
This poem specifically hit home for me and I completely agree. The structure is a little weak, but I figure when you wrote it you were very upset and the words more flowed freely, and those are the best kind.
This poem is very secretive. It is not easy to decipher the subject in which you were trying to describe. If this was your purpose, then congratulations. If it was not, I would consider being a bit more specific. Maybe you could lengthen your stanzas.
I did not find the myself wanting to read more and more of this piece. It was slightly interesting, but it could have something to do with the fact that I cannot stand politics and I do not particularly like people who are afraid of hard work. Keep doing what you do kid, maybe it will work out for you.
I like the concept of this poem. It is not your traditional poem about love and loss, but rather a peculiar subject that is rarely thought of as significant. You do put a grand spin on this though and I would definitely recommend it to other readers.
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