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AGE: 14
LOC: Myrtle Beach, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 23

I love to write! I am working on a series of books I hope to someday publish!

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Lyrics / Closer To Summer
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Next week is the last Week of school. Soon my friends Will be leaving. I may never See them again- Ever. Cause now all we're doing Is getting Closer to summer! With the pools opening, And sprinklers going- Now. Getting hotter and hotter everyday Cause we're getting Closer to summer Every moment.
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Poetry / Hurt
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Hurt is like A smacking wave- It pulls you under The crushing power.   Hurt looks like Your "best  friends" eyes- Cold and piercing Beneath their appearance.   Hurt sounds like The dropping of tears- So small and faint Yet huge to you.   Hurt feels like Being stabbed- Either from the front Or back.   Hurt tastes like The devil's blood- Black and nasty From a "friend".   Hurt smells like Fire burning- In their eyes Or heart.   Hurt is the ...
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Short Story / Connection
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  You know when you're in middle school, how you start having feelings? Not just for you're "immediate" friends, but for someone completely out if you're range. That's what is going on with me, Emma Granger.   I am in my freshman year in highschool and school is almaost over. I've waited so long to ask him out. But my other friends have asked and he's rejected them all. I'm starting to get doubtful. Though, my friends encourage me. He has the perfect profile every girl dre...
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Their blue- The color of the morning sky. Majestic in their own way, When I look at them I'm lost. They make me feel comfort- A sense of peace- For I feel sfe around you. At the center Lighter rays of blue Bounce off the pupil. They sing to me As a beautiful piano song would- To any other person. But I am not one of them. I look at things From a different perspective. Your eyes- The color of your birthstone- Aquamarine.
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Poetry / Love
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When you are sad I feel for you. I know the pain And suffering, You're going through.   When I saw you I knew then That we would hold true. Oh how our friendship Has been.   But now We have "evolved". And we keep more in touch Because now Love is involved.
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Short Story / anti- twiliight
I absolutely loved it. it deefinately kept me reading. i believe, in the beginning, you not use that harsh of language. i think it would be better towards the end. i don't know how this is qualified as a short story, though. overall it was great!
Non-fiction / FMS Friends: Chapter 1
It was too short to be a chapter, to me. But on the other hand, most of it was true.
That was the trongest poem I've ever read! It made me think what life is for and the difficulties you face if you go through with life. The thing is: what if people believe in God(i'm on of them) and life? That could get really defensive.
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Poetry / Torn
You were descriptive in this piece. And you have a fabulous rhyme scheme, but I felt as if I got left off. I wish this poem was longer. Your last stanza didn't really rie the poem up for me, sorry. Hope you add on to it, anyhow I enjoyed the poem.
Novel Treatments / Closure-In Response
Everything was great, but I was confused. Is this entire piece the letter or just part of it? You started out with "Dear Kat" and you never told me when or if she stopped writing the letter. I did love how your words were very strong and powerful throughout. The tone, to me, was piercing. I hope you will add on to this piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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Flash Fiction / Poor November
Novel Treatments / Closure-In Response

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