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AGE: 42
LOC: Seattle, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 27

I am a mother…

I have a beautiful daughter who breaks my heart and saves my life on a moment by moment basis.

I am now or have been a poet, priestess, singer,wife, whore, businesswoman, critic, drone, friend, companion and lover.

I have given up on trying to be anything less than what I am…
Life is a performance art… “and all the world a stage” as Shakespeare would say.

The cast that has filled the play of my life to date has been brilliant and despicable by turns… but all the lines and mistakes have been my own and in the end I will be able to stand by what I have done and whom I have chosen to act with.

Besides.. who doesn’t love a dark comedy?

On editing.  I critique all works that I read.  I realize t…

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Short Story / Spring Writing (6-word)
Version 1
9 Reviews   25 Comments
Sunshine streaming, sapping will... maybe tomorrow.
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Poetry / Stars On My Window
Version 1
8 Reviews   10 Comments
Memory of you, skin like silk, lit by the moon cast stars you drew on my window to make me smile. No image of you hurts me more, than that quiet vision. You sleeping next to me, sated, drunken, dreaming. Golden fire briefly stilled by night time’s silver light. As I lay reveling, mourning… knowing even then the fleeting nature of moonlight and the passing fancy of a golden boy in summer.  
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Poetry / Suicide Note
Version 1
10 Reviews   9 Comments
I can’t end us so I will end me. No messy blood, or swinging bodies, just a neat paragraph in the obituaries, stumbled across by accident or pointed out by a friend. More of an afterthought, since you cost the world the real me, years ago. I’m just finishing up for you. “The immediate family of, regrets to inform you that on the 9th of April 2009 she passed on to better days. She was a dedicated mother, artist’s lover and friend. She was preceded by her self respect an...
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Poetry / Snowfall In Springtime
Version 1
9 Reviews   5 Comments
It takes me by surprise. Like walking past a mirror and seeing what I am rather than what I feel. To start the morning reveling in the buzz of humming bird's wings as they dive bomb the unwary beneath the feeder. To finish the day watching in wonder the heavy silent fall of snow building up a blanket yet again over earth already budding.
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Poetry / Cliffhanger
Version 1
9 Reviews   5 Comments
We have had this scene before... an exit staged, a cliffhanger. But my fingers are down to the bone this time. I don't have the strength to be the one that holds out. So I either need a hand up or to be left to fly. It's hard to tell if these tears are caused by the wind in my eyes, or the pain of knowing you have both hands full.
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Quotes / My life as an Artist
by bsheldon
Two great benchmarks but I expected this to somehow encompass more from the title.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Screenplay / Once Upon a Time in Manchester Part 1
by Matthewtuckey
"wiji" Ouija HA! I love playing "Who am I?" If you are looking to pad this out you may consider adding some more voice over to the house part/drug section. You give yourself a nice opportunity with the Ouija board to give some foreshadowing or if you want to give him a bigger let down to give him a rosy future prediction. Another opportunity which is may be a little tired is to have him digging around for interview clothes. Being to broke to buy new ones is a fairly standard graduate issue. H...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Violent By Nature-S2.1
by FrakKevin
“Alright you nag.” comma after alright. "Four months ago she delivered a beat down like one I had..." she HAD... NONE I had EVER. "...Stadium Farm, most were home..." Since you get guff for the shortness of your chapters you can afford a few words in places like this. "...Stadium Farm, since most of its residents were home..." or some such. "...nights doing the same for Wren." Slow down there, tiger. She hasn't stated she "lusts" after anyone. "...nights thinking of Wren." He sniffs the air f...
Children's / Jaynie and the Bad Day
by robinonettey
LOL... sort of a dirty trick to play on a reviewer, you know. My only real criticism here is to be consistent with "coats" you say "We have coats" and at the beach they take off their coats but they put on "jackets" with their sweaters and boots. "Jaynie favorite!" Jaynie's Very sweet. The last line could use a bit more oomph! for this age group. Maybe something like "Mom was right, being together really did make the BEST TIMES!"
Flash Fiction / Samaritan (version 3)
by Howard_Bushart
Other than not capitalizing "forgetting" this piece is letter perfect. Being version 3, that comes as no surprise
100.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
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