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AGE: 16
LOC: Anthony, NM
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 07

I see myself as a romantic writer mainly but I love to explor and try my hand at other genres. I’m an amime freak and much of my inspiration comes from that. Some of favorite authors are Poe and Hawthorne; I love how they nudge their characters into the realm of insanity and watch them squirm. My love of witing started when I was thirteen and hasn’t died yet regardless of bad critiques or incidents. I’m a bit of a random person with a twisted sense of humor…

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Poetry / Useless Junk
Version 1
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There is no point in keeping broken promises. I know that now. Yet I continue to shove them into my pockets, Like stolen diamonds and gold lockets. I stuff and I shove these broken promises, Until there was no room for much else... Then I began to wonder, As I stood pockets bulging, Where are all the kept promises? Why have I failed to keep my kept promises? An epiphany overwhelms me. Rapidly I begin to empty my pockets, Hoping to find at least one promise kept, Only to find rusted ...
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Version 2
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It was a mild day in July when I met Mrs. Ant. I remember that humorous day so vividly; forever raw in my imagination. I was sipping on my lemonade and thanking the breeze for gently swaying my hammock, About to drift into slumber when I heard the tiny grumpy mumbler. I spotted her hurrying across the patch of dirt underneath the mulberry tree . On this particular afternoon I was overcome by an impulse so amiable curiosity so it was Inevitable that I asked, “ If you don’t mind ...
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It was a mild day in July when I met Mrs. Ant. I remember that humorous day so vividly; forever raw in my imagination. I was sipping on my lemonade and thanking the breeze for gently swaying my hammock, About to drift into slumber when I heard the tiny grumpy mumbler. I spotted her hurrying across the patch of dirt underneath the mulberry tree . On this particular afternoon I was overcome by an impulse so amiable curiosity so it was Inevitable that I asked, “ If you don’t mind ...
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Quotes / Five
This should probably be listed under poetry but quotes work just as fine. I agree that things were easier during childhood. People become so mean after they give themselves up for social acceptence. "Well done" lol.
Young Adult / Silenced
My first thought was that it reminded me of those emo teenager stories which are totally cliche, but the title makes me think perhaps there is something more to it. I'm curious to know what happens next. The story story has much potential to be great and as always with dark stories hopefully it'll be clever too.
Poetry / Fair
Excellent word usage, there's plenty of details decribing the setting but not enough describing the guy or how the speaker feels.
Quotes / Social Change
Perfect quote in my opinion. Bold, smart, and funny the way it should be.
Lyrics / Goodbye MJ
That was a very sad day indeed...I like how even though it's a sad song I feel happy at the same time.
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