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AGE:
30
LOC: Glendora, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 27
LOC: Glendora, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 27
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Version 3
15 Reviews
9 Comments
Empty, Lonely Room, Once man, now decaying flesh, Walls covered in gore
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Version 2
11 Reviews
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They call them zombies. Hollywood has interpreted their kind and spun the thread of the story almost as many times as the Vampire. Zombie, that is as good of a name as any I suppose. I really do not care what label you put on them as long as I do not have to face one in person again. It’s been about four days since this ‘beast’ came into my seemingly normal existence. It’s funny how simple and unassuming life is until forced into a confrontation with a meat puppet with the teeth of a gnashin...
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Version 1
2 Reviews
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They call them zombies. Hollywood has interpreted their kind and spun the thread of the story almost as many times as the Vampire. Zombie, that is as good of a name as any I suppose. I really do not care what label you put on them as long as I do not have to face one in person again. It's been about four days since this 'beast' came into my seemingly normal existance. It's funny how simple and unasuming life is until forced into a confrontation with a meat puppet with the teeth of a gnashing ...
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Version 1
1 Review
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"I felt guilty once, but she woke up half way through"
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Version 5
7 Reviews
2 Comments
Pressed to your pout, greedy full lips take me in, sensation compared by none, my inhibitions released, my exhibitions fullfilled, you prod, I shudder, inhaled to a deepest home calm, soothed my body spent my body numb.
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while with such horrific and taboo subject matter I must admit that I really enjoyed the piece. there were a couple of timing beats that were off - but the pain and anguish and choice of words that were used far outweighed the importance. a father of two daughters this piece chills me deeply and leaves a sadness in my heart for any child that endures such a ghastly sin and burden. excellent job in grinding up all those twisted and painful feelings into a very well written and thought provokin...
nice ending - the whole time that i was reading this I noticed that you struck a chord with catholics - well, with me at least. The shame of not only confessing to a priest as we do - but another shame of the trusted priests and the lack of self control that they have been exhibiting over the years. The end is a slap in the face to that and those feelings of .. remorse. Overall, very smooth - nice flow.
As a father of a 19 month old and another on the way in about 3 weeks this piece struck a cord and I truly enjoyed the piece. However, regardless of the impact it had on me, it fell a bit short by the use of words such as you, my, and, I. These are "cheater" ways to get a syllable in this genre and take away so much that could be. there are 9 syllables used in this fashion.
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