Zanladar's profile
AGE:
29
LOC: Glendora, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 06
LOC: Glendora, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 06
www.myspace.com/zanladar
Besides my real name being Charlie this is all I’ve got to say unless you ask.
I’m from southern california. Have always enjoyed writing. Do not care if I mispell, have improper grammar, or misplaced punctuation. I’m just writing to write – please review the CONTENT not the unimportant stuff.
I’m crude and extremely sarcastic. I write mostly while listening to pearl jam, Bush, or ‘cough cough’ the crash test dummies – sorry! I still love the ‘god shuffeled his feet’ cd. great stuff. I’m not here to amaze you with big words or try to act like a hardcore poetry college student who always acts pompus on websites likes these. I’m just here to have some fun.
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Empty, Lonely Room, Once man, now decaying flesh, Walls covered in gore
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They call them zombies. Hollywood has interpreted their kind and spun the thread of the story almost as many times as the Vampire. Zombie, that is as good of a name as any I suppose. I really do not care what label you put on them as long as I do not have to face one in person again. It’s been about four days since this ‘beast’ came into my seemingly normal existence. It’s funny how simple and unassuming life is until forced into a confrontation with a meat puppet with the teeth of a gnashin...
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They call them zombies. Hollywood has interpreted their kind and spun the thread of the story almost as many times as the Vampire. Zombie, that is as good of a name as any I suppose. I really do not care what label you put on them as long as I do not have to face one in person again. It's been about four days since this 'beast' came into my seemingly normal existance. It's funny how simple and unasuming life is until forced into a confrontation with a meat puppet with the teeth of a gnashing ...
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"I felt guilty once, but she woke up half way through"
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Version 5
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2 Comments
Pressed to your pout, greedy full lips take me in, sensation compared by none, my inhibitions released, my exhibitions fullfilled, you prod, I shudder, inhaled to a deepest home calm, soothed my body spent my body numb.
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As a father of a 19 month old and another on the way in about 3 weeks this piece struck a cord and I truly enjoyed the piece. However, regardless of the impact it had on me, it fell a bit short by the use of words such as you, my, and, I. These are "cheater" ways to get a syllable in this genre and take away so much that could be. there are 9 syllables used in this fashion.
I enjoy the expanded haiku/senryu - some topics need the deeper and fuller versions that just seem unfinished. Maybe it's because I'm not a big fan of alcohol but the topic just seems like it could have been finished with one stanza. I didn't feel they set up a whole story - just different pieces during a day that didn't climax - so as a whole - could have just been a series of pieces instead of one.
I really enjoy the whole haiku / senryu category. While most are sweet and get a tad on the bizarre, I found yours refreshing. The biggest fear I believe in any animal, whether that be beast or human, is the thought of now being in a fight for our own survival. The natural instinct kicks in, and I felt mine kick in with this one. nicely played
lol both sarcastic and if that's the mindset you have, extremely depressing to awake for another wonderful god packed day.
nice collection of haikus. i personally like the perfection one. looks like it would belong on a post card.
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