aardjordan's profile
AGE:
38
LOC: Seattle, WA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 14
LOC: Seattle, WA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 14
i am a gallery owner/dealer/critic in seattle. i do some inventing mostly odd ball homegoods/hardware products. i love to cook for friends. i write mostly poetry some commentary and shorts.
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my goal is to have both a written on oral version of my work POSTED AT THE SAME TIME i am just starting to share so it may be a day or so for the video up loads
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www.youtube.com/aardjordan
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Saturday night The streets are thick with cabs Flailing yellow honk Spring and the girls power room perfect Pulse in airbrushed magazine colors Like traffic we throng as a crowd and beat as one All trying to be the night. Division of need and class Give default wisdom to humanity The strongest let the group beat And eat free The manna of spare change
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American road is the beat of the base line Listen to the guitar grind As the engines whine By the way baby Why are you trying to get a piece of mine? Wind bumps my skin And cramps my hands As I, Burn into American highways’ Looking for my girl Jack crooked and mad dog mean The kind who makes the fingers in my heart form into a fist and pound my chest Looking for Sugar coated iron With eyes of chrome American road
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Here now and living a new life forgiven by myself a vision of defined possibility It all works out Great universe give me all I believe in Can it be yes it can feel your dream? Believe it can be real and it does Begin front and belly
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Shame is the dirt on my face Tomorrow is my revenge for my failure today Again, again tomorrow What do I have to offer u for progress? Except the dirt on my face
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Shame is the dirt on my face Tomorrow is my revenge for my failure today Again, again tomorrow What do I have to offer u for progress? Except the dirt on my face
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this was a good poem as to lots of the criteria on this publishable and the agent thing' i am not the best of creditable of reviewers on such queries it was good and had some good points clean and correct keep it up needs more punch more guts
i think lots of people can relate to these feelings it lacks punch grit and power and "misty haze" you can do better that that ! keep it up
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