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AGE:
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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 07
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 07
I’m Katie…
the outdoors, books, music, skating, and words are my entire life…
I’m a sophmore at michigan state university, majoring in professional writing with minors in film studies and psychology.
im also kind of a hippie and tree hugger to the core. peace and love, dudes! <3
i love feedback, so any kind of advice or words of wisdom (annoyance, disdain, whatever) is totally appreciated!
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KEVIN “Hey, Kev, have you gotten your press pass for Pitchfork in the mail yet?” Jake asks in the office on Monday. “Um, no, not yet. But Lacie’s still getting most of my mail, so she’s probably got it.” “Psycho Lacey?” “She’s actually not that bad, truth be told. I mean, yeah, she might be a little off her rocker, but relatively harmless. We hung out a bit last night.” “So you’re thinking about tappin’ that?” Phil pops his head up from his desk. For the past hour his eyes have been glued to ...
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i really like the idea of this piece as a whole. from the very first line you had my attention (which doesnt happen to me often, so feel proud!) the whole piece is weird, but in a delightful way; unbelievable in a fantastic way. i hope that makes sense. the thing is, i'm just not sure the majority of readers are going to really "get" this, if you know what I mean...it's just a little out there, particularly in the very beginning. once you hit the middle, i think you do a better job of reignin...
the first thing i noticed is that you have a real knack for dialog -- it flows very nicely and sounds natural. some writers have uge issues with this, so well done. I think the relationship between Charlotte and Dave is really interesting and cute. i cant wait to watch it develop as this story progresses. On the 5th page, you have this segment: Dave congratulated Charlotte and lead the teams up the path when the whistle signaled it was time for dinner. Charlotte stayed behind to collect the g...
I've read a few of your other "conversations" pieces and i just had to leave a critique, just to sing you your praises... because all of them are hilaaaaaaaarious!! really, i love love love all of them. curt is such a loveable character; super cute and well developed. i can definitly see a lot of him in a couple of my gay friends. dave, on the other hand, im not quite sure i really "get" yet. certainly not as much as curt. maybe i just need to read more... just one note i have is that there i...
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