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AGE: 52
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 14

I’m English, and I’m a writer – married, two wonderful children. I have another job as well, but a good friend of mine told me that you can’t be a writer until you have the courage to call yourself one. I’m guilty of an inappropriate sense of humour from time to time, but I do like to be fair. I will never insult another writer in a review, but neither will I mollycoddle. Backscratching reviews are worthless, and most people know that if they’re honest with themselves. I don’t want them, and I won’t give them. I will always be honest. If I say I like something, you’ll know I mean it. But if my “helpful ratio” depends on always saying nice things – well, I might be in trouble. I’ve reviewed as a profession in troubled times, and I know th…

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Short Story / Manifest Destiny
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Manifest Destiny by Alaric P. McDermott Copyright 2007 Churubusco, 27th August 1847: “All the world knows that Yankee hates Paddy.” THOMAS GALLAGHER 1 The four of us watched as Antonio Lopez de Santa Anna pepped up the Mexxies in the courtyard below. There were yells and raised fists. There were yelps of solidarity dressed up as exciting slogans from young officers, and I was cynical enough to suspect these might have been choreographed at some earlier time, in some safer place. And Francis O...
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Short Story / Manifest Destiny
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Manifest Destiny by Alaric P. McDermott Copyright 2007 Churubusco, 27th August 1847: “All the world knows that Yankee hates Paddy.” THOMAS GALLAGHER 1 The four of us watched as Antonio Lopez de Santa Anna pepped up the Mexxies in the courtyard below. There were yells and raised fists. There were yelps of solidarity dressed up as exciting slogans from young officers, and I was cynical enough to suspect these might have been choreographed at some earlier time, in some safer place. And Francis O...
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Okay. So you're a stalker. Kidding. This has a nice hazy feel to it. Romantic yet bittered down with frustration and disappointment. Desperate yet sweetened with hope. I like the possibility it offers me of seeing the drink spilling as fitting in events after the fact. Yes, definitely enjoyed this.
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It's circular. But sorry, I don't get why, and I don't get IT. You must have had a reaction in mind when you did this, but I'm afraid mine is just confusion. The writing is smooth and the dialogue snappy. You show great promise.
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I'm not sure why you say everything after this seemed superfluous. The piece isn't clear, truly. It probably is to you, but you know the intent of the clues (if any). Why earthquake? Is it truly an earthquake? Why the raging deity? I can only interpret a tsunami, perhaps, a boy facing death, and mother earth, but there's nowhere near enough here to make those guesses stick. Obscurity is fine, but the borderline to inclarity is a slim one. My suggestion - consider idiot readers like me. Paint ...
Short Story / Abandoned Love
I'm not so sure about this. It seems unredeemed, in the sense that it goes to no trouble to justify itself. It may be that the story of a killer has merit in that it explains motivation, or it may be a detective story - I'm not saying it needs to carry a message, but it does need to carry substance. To focus in this way on the man's satisfaction at a single incident seems shallow water and there's almost an implication for the reader (which I'm sure isn't intended) that the character should b...
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