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Puyallup, WA
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As a child I enjoyed reading books and writing my own stories. Now, a mother of three, I loves reading to my children and telling them stories. This love for literature inspired me to start writing again and begin the Kobikobis Island Series.
I am the brunette, my sister is the one with blonde hair…..YES we are full blooded sisters! This trait of dark and light siblings runs deep in my family history.
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A light thunder noise erupted into the rooms of the tiny cottage moments before the earth began to fiercely shake. Teag could hear screaming from every direction. His heart raced as everything around him came crashing down, glass shattering and the walls and roof began to cave in. Trying to reach the doorway to the outside, Teag stumbled and tripped as was furniture toppling over inches from crushing him. Fear struck as he suddenly began to float in the air, out of his own control, he was pul...
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Hi Jay, This was great. Some of it I already knew but most of it was very helpful for my next book. You may want to add publishing do's and don'ts as I was an idiot and went with self publishing for my first book (PublishAmerica) Liars and a 7 year contract and over priced book to show for it. Thanks
This is great - this woman wants to be taken out of her misery as she pleads for this man (whom we know not) to do it for her. When he starts walking away she’s about to kill him and he turns to kiss her. What’s this all about? It’s really interesting and I would like to read more to find out WHY!! (SMILE) Thanks for the read.
This was good, I could certainly relate to the emotions. I really only say one part that I thought might need to be changed "and attacks the heart…When other times" - try - and attacks the heart…while other times. great job.
Nice work. I understood what you were trying to say and could feel your emotion. nice and sappy. (smile) Just the way romance should be.
