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AGE: 19
LOC: Pittsfield, NH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 18

just a crazy teenager :]

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Poetry / suggest a title?
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And if this night could go on forever We would be partying until our lungs burst, Let the liquor drown the butterflies Of thinking that life won't ever be the same. And when we walk to the car tonight We'll drive this street one last time And we'll never look back Because the road is paved with memories Of nights we were too drunk off our Happiness to stand Because we could smile through tragedy Of small town life and small town minds. For years we talked about getting out As fast as we could...
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Poetry / the cats cry
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I wonder how it feels when no one understands your pain, your peril. I'm hungry, I'm thirsty: please let me in. The lazy life of a feline- may not be so effortless after all. In essence, the screams of a cat are silent. Incoherent. A plea of forgiveness for peeing on your new vintage rug a chilling final cry- to the man who kicked his canines right out of his small, piercing, mouth. Thank you- he says for letting me rest in that basket. He leaves a final gift upon your doorstep. A small remin...
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"You're beautiful," he whispers softly in her ear. She half heartedly smiles. Her young face not visible to him. He kisses her cheeks gently, carefully, and affectionately. He moves slowly from her cheeks, to her earlobes and down the pane of her pale neck. He grasps her hips with his fingertips, and lifts his head towards her face. After a moment of deep eye contact,she tilts her head back and closes her eyes; an ocean of wavy hair almost reaching the bed. His strong, yet delicate hands trac...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Learned-Six Word Memoir
not much I can say about this besides the fact that I like it. Life's little discoveries :P
Poetry / A Final Kiss
I really enjoyed this piece of writing. Earlier today I was watching a Dr. Phil episode about women dating much younger men. I specifically loved "Autumn’s reach has wilted my flesh, While youth springs from your loins." Beautiful. The 'flow' of your writing is magnificent.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / On Marriage
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Poetry / 555 - KaBoom
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Poetry / For my Boy
This poem is pretty abstract, which i'm sure is what you're going for. I'm a little confused about the whole meaning of the poem, though.
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