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Short Story / CUltiVatE
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The images on the screen flicker. Dull in the highest of definitions. His eyes crawled right back into his head. "This is not where i'm suppose to be, got a smile {even} for depravity" The words carved right out from under his hands, "I never wanted to be sick of my life" rung out in the background. Erna's voice unleashed a wave of revelations and with every thought the cuts of his pen bled the page removing the old. The sweet swing of his poetry and prose suddenly pulsate...
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Lyrics / bOlIvIa
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BOLiVIA 08. Y ahora que paso en Bolivia??? justo cuando la sangre me la deje caer a tibia. Your anger's still a gift! Mis cholos despedazados como lobos en libros, they call it fables. Truth spun round the tables like musical chairs, Fuck it's not fair & FUCK YOU if you dont care. This is grown man business in the upside down world, Mos definately I know, so you know, got weight behind this flow like sunken spaniards and inca gold. History repeats itself cause we still refuse to be so...
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Lyrics / vEnOm
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VENOM:3:32PM AUG.09 VERSE I Reflections of that echoe shine bright on the screen, it seems like everybody is caught up in the past or a dream. like the 7mile serpant shedding old skins you're bland 2 me I open doors & now I c aching eyes, all venom feels the same way u c Paralyze & say my name one last time before it settles in the blood line. I find my pleasure naked in the twisted of this mind {like joints} smoke in mirrors & technological scripitures are now profecy in no time....
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jan.03/2008 It hAs settled in, fermented over the steps in this cage. A little higher and tighter they turn, forming just a little bit of fascination. Lost memories & lust on this lonely night of creeping contemplation & crocked cold,it stalks me. I can tolerate life outside, it contorts to seductive silences frozen still in their positions, almost sexual, branch on branch. But noise is what i need, so i flicker with the knob & serenity forms from the beauty i find in all. Anima...
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fist the bruised fruit Got my fist up, in & through. Pointed too a point of view more twisted then the shining 2, little girls & elevator spills, vomit, hurls & no great revolution for us. We are the middle children of a pale rerun world. Weeping for fucking fruit & felines all the while upside down bastards brutalized cause no concern to you. It's okay you do what you gotta do, i got your back, me & my few A & S, & neta i was tought. Found my girl & now in...
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Poetry / A City of Light
1st pArAgRApH dReW mE IN, tAp iN a lIttLe dEEpEr.
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Query Letter / The Willer Club Seven
Hey man I'm not familiar at all with the format of these letters. What I will say is that you don't present your work with enough confidence. Your shit's good enough, this man should be lucky to represent you. Think big dude, and tell him what you want from him and why. I'd also try to portay the synopsis of your story with more emotion. After 78,500 words you know the material, be more specific. SALUD ALX
uSe yOuR mEtApHoRs. mAkE tHem uNiQuE tO yOu. eXpReSSiOn is cOnfIdEncE.
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straight up B. art isn't about rhyme structure or punctuation.... i completely agree, art is emotional, it's animal. cavemen were painting caves before they knew what a fucking haiku was i'm tired of people pointing out technicalities. style and structure can be learnt, insight and depth comes from within. let's move beyond these shallow reviews and delve deeper. peace aLx sTrEEt
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