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AGE: 25
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 22

“I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)
~From Mad Girl’s Love Song/Sylvia Plath

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Poetry / Drink Soy
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Post apocalyptic thoughts wrapped up in a macdonald's logo, dipped in big mac sauce- we are full on our own lies post manipulation, self gratification we still eat on full stomachs post realization, self ratification we continue to eat knowing what's in it as humans we are conditioned by the ones closest to us drink milk slogans that read "it does a body good" we are the greediest of species the only ones sucking off another species milk
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Quotes / No title
Version 1
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Poetry is organized emotion
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Poetry / First Eve
Version 1
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They blame you for your strength your beauty twisting the word LIVE until EVIL is all that remains of you but I know who you are truth is what was buried and like a great explorer I will dig you up again
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Poetry / Social Phobia
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Today I choked, not once, not twice, but all the way through consistently-like a slow death only to find that I will live for now. and through it all, I prayed for sweet release that those stares that cause the burning of my flushed flesh is the catalyst for my spontaneous combustion. and then I would have a reason to jump up and run, run, run! from the room because the only worse reason for my phobia is not having a reason at all.
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Lyrics / The End
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Missing you all more an' more knowing it isn't right I should just turn and walk out that door and into the night but I've been needin' ya more an' more is that a crime? you make me feel like I robbed a store showing up like this but I needed to know for sure that its the end I guess I'll turn right back out the door and into the night You gived it all gived it all away How could you do this to someone? I have heard it all before You met that someone You gived it all, gived it all away I know...
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Poetry / Fiery Winter
The descriptions and passion in your poem prove to be genuine as well as beautiful. I especially like the last paragraph. Bravo
Poetry / Nihilism Love
I like this poem because it brings out an emotion in me. Can you honestly say that love is something that we just act out because it is what the media portrays as normal? If you really think that way, maybe you are a sociopath. I do not mean to insult you, but if you can say that you have never experienced love in all it's wonderful glory than I feel sorry for you. However it is just a poem. Maybe it is not literal. Maybe it is. Good job antagonizing an audience. It results in good emotional ...
Despite the fact that this poem has numerous spelling errors, even in the title which gives readers the impression that the author may not be that serious about their poetry, it is pretty good. I think it needs some work still. Good start though. Keep it up!
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