amcclure has no favorites yet.
amcclure's profile
AGE:
26
LOC: Salem, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 23
LOC: Salem, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 23
Well I am 22 yrs old I live in Oregon I have 2 little boys, Dillon is 3 yrs old and Gavin is 17 months. I am married have been for almost a year. Marriage is very hard, and I think some people change after marriage and not for the better sometimes. I have been writing poetry for 10 years, and I can honestly say my writing has gotten so much better at least in my eyes. I have written anything new in awhile, and I want to start focusing on my writing more. When I used to write alot it was such a great outlet for me and I feel where I am in life right now I could really use that therapy, I need it right now, I joined Urbis to get opinions on my writing and to get my name out there. To give me more of a reason to write I have people who w…
(more)Items
Version 1
2 Reviews
0 Comments
Never knew there was love like this Never thought it would find me even if it really did exist always thought I would end up lonely That I deserved much less But, now your here, by my side all I fear, all I hide everything deep within Is everything I've shown and still this love doesn't end all it's done is grown You've seen all my colors all my emotions and still I wonder how we are still holding, holding this together how everyday it only gets better You've brought me happiness You've broug...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
1 Review
0 Comments
The words are said the thoughts won't stop the feelings dead my world is lost as I lye here in my bed not wanting to get up knowing my world will go on knowing theres something I must do even though your gone even though I can't have you you've put me in the ground you've left me in this place with no one around and only the salt from your skin to taste I relive the memories that make me happy you said you had to go and I will give up on you coming back cause now your just a part of my past
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
When all your hopes are lost I'll be by your side when you must pay the cost I'll give you a place to hide when you can't help but fall I'll be there to catch you when you've given your all I'll be the one you call weh you feel theres nothing true I'll be there to take your pain when all your promises are gone I'll give my everything when your world feels wrong I'll be the one when you feel weak, not all strong I'll be the one you see when your desires nothing but a spark I'll be ger holding ...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
What will my feelings show if I say them out loud if I let you know will the intensity be proud? will the feelings slowly grow? will the sight of me be too overwhelming? too fast to be prepared too slow to realize at that moment you cared the first time you wanted to try and show all you wanted to bare too scared and too shy the complete want to be there the want to not say goodnight the trembling fear to see just black and shed your last tear take all your love back strip me of everything so...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
The feeling inside that kills the pain all that hides that won't ever change it's buried so deep with the passion you bring the happiness when I sleep and hear the song you sing that wanst so much for this to go away and for us to touch and all we want to say that hides behind fear that this feeling will end but for you to be here and make my smile resurface again take my hand and lead the way so we will understand the pain of yesterday so you can feel all you wanted to but never could before...
Ratings & Rankings
[ View all items ]
Reviews
its a good quote and everyone can relate to wanting to be happy and not wanting to show their unhapiness
WOW!! this poem may be short but it gives the reader some great imagery and the words that were used I don't think you could've picked better words I especially love the line "as small as one of a billion angels dancing on a pinhead" i felt this line was strong of emotion and I could really understand the meaning of the poem, but like with anything else every reader will perceive it differently and get something different out of it
i like some parts of this poem bu ti thought other parts just didn't flow right, with all the commas i felt there were too many pauses and with that it felt tense and not as relaxed as it should've felt for example "Snow falls, the rain comes, and the fog will fill the earth on your way home from work," it just didn't feel right but the last part of the poem was very raw and I feel the poem in it's entirety could feel just as raw if the layout was different so the words melt
[ View all reviews ]
Favorites
People
