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AGE:
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LOC: Thailand
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 12
LOC: Thailand
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 12
I am a teacher and a writer.
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Copy Written by Ami Blackwelder2009 http://amiblackwelder.blogspot.com Month one: March Evelyn I remember the first time I saw her, meandering like a ghostly vision up the hallways of Green Mountain Falls High. Her snow brown boots cover her feet and her high white socks stick out over the top. Her white leggings are snug and tight, wrapping around her small legs until they disappear underneath her light blue jean skirt. A small bit of...
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-The Day the Flowers Died- Friday, September 25, 1931 Autumn in Munich is always the most beautiful time to her. The leaves change colors and fall beneath her feet. She loves to walk over the orange, yellow, and brown irregular shapes on the cobble stone sidewalk near her home and listen to the sounds of the leaves crunching. The skies are filled with chalky white clouds and streams of variant blues. She hops off the sidewalk and onto the wet patty grass, lowering to the rose bushes aligned a...
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An award winning story from the Best Fiction of UCF, Cypress Dome of 1997. Additionally, a semi-final of the Laurel Hemingway contest 1997. From Joy We Come, Unto Joy We Return The sky is a dark and heavy rock about to drop. Her light blue shade bleeds violently with grays and dark blues. I am kneeling before my open window. ‘You are wisdom. You are law. You are our heart, soul, and breath.’ Fattened clouds roll eastward, but she is quiet. Fields of rice, reaching across acres...
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A Collection of Personal Shorts by Ami Blackwelder Falling From Mecca 'I was once told that a journey starts with the first step, so this was my prayer: for my husband to walk in my shoes.' On the borders of Iraq and Iran there is a line that divides two kinds of people, two different traditions, cultures and ways of life. This relationship might be something akin to the lines drawn between the man and woman. Inside these white mountainous, lush green lands bordering the Turquoise P...
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A Sacred Part I’ve held the most sacred part of life under a burning sun A dark blue sky with white brave clouds Lazily laying upon trampled green grass freshly cut Wrapped only with a quilt made of yellow-purple patches And bits of unraveling thread Surrounded by smells of honeycomb and honeysuckle Telling me that I am tasting something So sweet, so delicate, so unique It could only be found here between you and me And it couldn’t be found anywhere else on this earth Or away from...
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love the first line, it draws me in to the story. I love the way u number the story, it makes it easy to read and u know what ur getting into with each part. Amidst all the umbrellas- the street looking like a product-endorsed version of the scene from Foreign Correspondent ----good mdescript I like all the details of the names and plces, making it more real, it reads more like true story. Maybe it is true?lol.
I must say it is one of the best written I have read thus far. The first line draws me in and the following lines are full of description. Even your dialgoue is more realistic than most. her background story is interesting to, it lets me know why she is and who she is ...I like details on pg 10 about her ballerina jewelery box, it lets us know more about her mom too. sorry, I don't have too much to critic, but i liked it, there wasn't much i'd change. emerald lawn looked like a scene out of G...
got infected (lose the got and just say infected) I’d heard that even their ticks (get rid of that) Your dialgoue is good, sometimes funny. It is an interesting story. I would just look out for little mistakes in grammar. I pointed out two. Don't say that too much and don't use too many ly words. You have a lot of good descriptions. and a lot of good verb usage like :(rhythmic panting ) its interesting to read about dogs, not many writers do that. your characters are really interesting. I lik...
I like it so far, but I would only say her full name once in the beginning and after that only Rachel. I think the story is interesting, but it needs more for me to get a full feeling on it. I wouldn't say publish it since there is only two pages. Post more up so I can look at it?
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