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AGE:
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LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 19
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 19
Hi there, I am a disabled , happily married mother of two teenage boys. I used to work in school as learning support assistant in classroom assistant capacity with under 8’s. I have various craft hobbies and in the last few months have found a deep desire to write poetry. I think poetry is an understated way we can make our voices heard and believe there is great revival happening in the reading market, where poetry is the niche to encourage people to read in small doses, able to put a piece down easier than a novel. I believe strong stories and pictures can be painted in very few words enabling a reader to have opportunity to take further though and inspiration away with them.
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Bigger than Jordan's, hundred percent natural!
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O'er many a stormy water, between raging storms we see a time of peace, tranquility, a calmness - time to be. When we think we travel the road alone, when life is all despair; reach out to distant far flung friends and let us show we care! We may not be able to lend a hand, but we can a friendly ear. By listening, give you voice - to make a stand, allow that shed of tear. To know we are not by ourself, find things in life are 'fun'. To recognise we're not on a shelf, Our lives but just begun....
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Okay, so this creates great descriptive of what is in the room with regards sight; but it may have added extra interest to it if you had included more of te senses. What can you hear/smell/taste, - is anything tactile - how so? I'm not rubbishing your piece, simply trying tobring more from it to hold your reader, you could try using comparrisons or mataphor within. Your ending is very open, it leaves me expectant of more to come, and you lack the use of capital letters throughout at the begin...
Wow, that was really very different, great imagery used within, it fills the mind with drama, colour and sound; holding you, willing you to get to the end of the piece. A fast moving, all singing, all dancing piece - well done!
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