anamorphy's profile
AGE:
27
LOC: Watertown, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 06
LOC: Watertown, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 06
Published poet and editor of a Literary arts journal. A selection of my my most recent work, a book of poems titled “FAREWELL TO THE DUST” is being published through finishing line press,the pre-release date is march 2008. I write for a living and enjoy exploring new plains of literature – theory. Poetry is my life, my poetry costs less than tickets to the opera.. even less than a recording of the opera, amazingly it is also less popular!
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With mimesis from mime, Implying, a chance is harmful and alluring, the cumulative effect of this binary being played out between different types of navigation- as a viscerally immediate, anti-absorptive readable. We look for fascinating texts, not something likely to have an absorptive effect, developing so gradually as to be well - established, before becoming apparent suggests a certain passivity of our habits. The flesh gives up its location — For identification demolished, subjective co...
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Forgive me if I seem oblivious to your fame. I can't get past the butter of your sunflower skin and honey licked mane. You smell of the promise of tender flesh and tangled legs, more tender still. and I can't shake the feeling that you're only a warm breeze on Aprils' window sill. If the taste of your belly matches the berry of your eyes' promise . I will live on nothing but your flesh until, my eyes open no more, nor see. There may I live, in our own little we ¿
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Forgive me if I seem oblivious to your fame. I can't get past the butter of your sunflower skin and honey licked mane. You smell of the promise of tender flesh and tangled legs, more tender still. and I can't shake the feeling that you're only a warm breeze on Aprils' window sill. If the taste of your belly matches the berry of your eyes' promise . I will live on nothing but your flesh until, my eyes open no more, nor see. There may I live, in our own little we ¿
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" l'object que vous vimes, mon ame, Ce beau matin d'ete si doux: Au detour d'un sentier une charogne infame Sur un lit seme' de cailloux." ¹ I When the sun sets The edges of the day begin to crinkle, the hot light of the sun now rounding the horizon flat then upward as if a sphere were able to bowl or inverse as a Platinum Catalyst the cool evening rounds the corner blowing dust and cool air and the day's debris down the sidewalks... hesitating dew the sky empties its stars upon us, many of ...
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Description Please Read "DECODING, DECODING THE PHYSICS" takes the original poem "DECODE THE PHYSICS" (both authored by myself C. S. Leaf) and through sound mathematics, codes it. This starts with the paring 2 (version (2)) through twenty (version (20)) consecutive letters, words, or phrases mathematically while, reconstructing the poem through A. A. Markov's Chain theory of probability. The poems all have 3210 characters same as the original poem, "DECODE THE PHYSICS" which concludes the var...
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Letting a rhyme drive your next line is helpful, I would expand out to beginning and middle rhymes also, some times less is more, a poem leaves the writer and becomes the readers, it is this ownership that makes the poem last so stating to much giving all of the info can take away from the mystery leaving just enough out so it can be personal to the reader. I gave a tighter example below not to say this is better but merely another option of words. I also removed many words think of condenci...
THE POEM WAS GOOD I FEEL IT COULD BE A LOT BETTER, THE RHYME SCHEME IS WEAK, NO SURPRISE, BUT THE RHYMES ARE GOOD IF THERE WAS SOME WAY TO REARRANGE TO INCORPORATE THE GOOD RHYMES / INTO MIDDLE AND BEGINNING RHYME, I HAVE NOT READ OTHER WORKS BY YOU AND I HAVE USED THE SAME FORMAT MYSELF MANY TIMES, BUT FIND MORE PLEASURE IN DERIVING FROM IT ALSO IF YOU FIXED THE METER PER LINE OR CHOSE A METER PER STANZA THIS WOULD ALSO BE A GOOD TOOL FOR PRACTICE AND WORD PLAY. I DID EJOY THE PIECE I JUST W...
Love the work, it concludes perfectly, the time table and title are intriguing making the events that lead to the horizon perfect. There is both sorrow and joy and most importantly the real, It is poignantly real. The joy in the end the characters realization and harmony... his break from his fathers teaching, his emotional out burst, his temporary insanity all that give way to the birth of his true sanity. Sad in the timing in the lost years meandering as a facade of one's inner feelings, a ...
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