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AGE: 29
LOC: Oklahoma City, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 30

im a poet. i love words..i am possessed obsessed consumed by words..how else can i explain it..every inch of my being as well as my psyche are shaken by the power of words..in the beauty, the ugliness, the audacity..

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Poetry / words
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I have no rhythm Except in the form Of words Words If only words could take form Into a body So human I could not help but to love it For its flaws And its beauty words Wrapped around lips Around tongues Around eye teeth And breasts I cant dance Upper body sways And convulses lower Body glued to the dance Floor -wait- isnt dancing the body’s interpretation of music and words? Sounds only a second To my blood Begun to dissect myself Ideas smoke silly -entropy- miles to go and still I have no r...
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Poetry / fallible
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my body is not made up of indestructible parts for instance- my shoulders used and abused almost to the point of oppression my spine-curvature so exact-that not even god has enough grace to correct it my lips worn out from speechlessness I am a canvas Body’s impermanence Sprung vivid In ideas Of angst And décor You left Me Solid Inanimate Urgency Your weapon Is a whisper of Heavenly unison Tactics Your rhythm Eyes Just Ambition trapped in eager Disguise Its too late And its too soon To remin...
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Poetry / gravity
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You cover me in cooling Your lavender infused body entangles me Each appendage wrapped inside of my psyche Ventricles laced with good intentions You cover me in thick branches Lilac eyes Eyelashes covering nothing but particles The twilight caresses every inch of my body And I pull you near me Sweet touch The beautiful curves in your hips and spine The only kind a man could really have Strong shoulders Ivy lips Climbing up my neck Light burst inside me connecting our bodies in Such a force t...
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Poetry / Untitled
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My arms outreach to the moon as to overwhelm and overcome her place her gently inside of my pocket akin to all the stars ive stolen for you I would die a thousand times If it meant affording you one moment of Zen I reach my hands into your belly Steal away any discomfort And slay the demons I find you dancing delicately among the Heavens in my night Your body no longer latent with Bittersweet melancholy He said that I am made of Haiku, embalming fluid And stars To this day I am still unsure O...
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Please deposit 50 cents 09/14/07 If I was a pony. Id be a my little pony. If I was a porn star. My name would be Tinkerbell Indiana. I want a coin-operated boy. I would name him Beverly. I want a Barbie dream house. I would pretend I was a demolition expert. And I would throw a bowling ball on it. And then set off fireworks in the elevator. I am going to become a vampire. To combat aging. I will eat my entire family. And most of my friends. Maybe I will make them vampires too. Sometimes I wa...
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Humor/Satire / Mothering Sunday
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This poem needs to be edited, you use to when it should be too : "To far below to be touch, Held to high to be reach." It also appears as though you might have meant touched instead of touch in that stanza as well. The piece was very visual you had a good amount of metaphor, the end was really disappointing compared to the rest of the poem. The last stanza made me cringe because it totally destroyed what the rest of the piece brought me. You might consider a bit of a re-write in that regard. ...
Poetry / ~ The Innocent ~
this part of your piece : They’re Gods angels "They’re our children They’re sleeping peacefully in the arms of love They’re free souls They’re Gods angels They’re our children" should echo the rest, stating they are. it flows much better. Just a suggestion. Also, this line: "They lye on the grass" I wasnt sure if it was meant to be an incorrect spelling of lay?!?! All in all a very beautiful piece. I do feel like the ending did not have as much kick as the rest of the piece. Hope this was hel...
Poetry / -need title-
Beautiful, moving to a point of quiet understanding. The line with the word familiarity, got a little stuck when i read it, didnt flow as well as the rest of the piece. I also think the second use of the word alone could be left out, I think since the first part states it, then later on lonely pops up. the poem reminds me of learning stillness. Maybe use a simple title since this poem is very short, sweet. Maybe entitle it "Still" or "At One with Stillness" just a few thoughts. Keep up the go...
This piece flows very well, it definately rolls off of the mind, down the spine. Something definately worthy of spoken word. The rhyme scheme was good, a few spots that were mildly predictable, but that didnt take away from the piece. Keep up the good work.
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