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AGE:
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LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 29
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 29
Hi there. Im a twenty five year old from Scotland. I would like to get some advice on my writing so any reviews will be greatly appreciated.
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The Aftermath Dark clouds loom above as I make the torturous journey home. It’s the anxiety and tiredness I feel most as our binge drinking session only finished three hours ago and I’m in a world of shit. The effects of a hangover haven’t kicked in yet but it’s coming my way, that’s for sure. I decided to go home and face the music just under twenty minutes ago and I’m not getting anywhere fast. I’m trying to psych myself up for the bollocking I’m going to receive from ma when I get home. I ...
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Hi there. This wouldn't normally be my type of thing but i actually enjoyed this. You have good strong charactors and a good storyline. I like your dialogue and good descriptions. I think you definately have a natural talent for this type of writing. I will definately read more of your work. Keep up the good work.
Hi there. Firstly, I think this is great. I think the opening was good because it puts the reader right in the picture and you know what's going on. I think you have a good style of writing which flows gracefully. It's really easy to read. I've not read anything else of yours but I definately will in the future.
Hi there. This isn't normally my type of thing but I really enjoyed this. You have a very strong lead charector and your style of writing is well. It flows well and is really easy to read. I will definately read more of this when I have the time. I think it has the potential to be great.
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