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AGE: 36
LOC: Bend, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16

I am a mom of two growing sons. I love all avenues of art. I think of myself as very artistic and intriguing. I will always try something at least once.

I love to paint on canvas with acrylics,love photography especially Black and White, and more recently, I began writing articles and getting them published with pay. So that has been pretty exciting.

I have had a photograph titled “Fun in The Fall” published in a book “Filters of the Imagination” in 2002. Recently, Another one of my photographs “Ember’s Bubbles” will be published in a book “Endless Journeys” due for publication winter 2007.

I am a college student. I love nature and the ocean. I love all plants creatures. I love waterfalls rivers, lakes, mountains and the brill…

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Should You Get A Second Opinion? By: Robbie Tittle Usually, you only go to the doctor for two reasons; a regular check up or you’re not well. If you’re not well, the doctor may require some testing or scans. You’re told to reschedule in a few days if you’re not better and you leave with prescriptions in hand. More often than not, you do begin to feel better. But what happens if you don’t? You schedule a follow up. You’re thinking, maybe the tests show something. Maybe this could be serious, ...
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Short Story / You Can Be Lawrence
"He’s (on) lying on his back in the alpha female’s bed" omit (on. "beer bottle float by and wondered, were he to jump into the water" "were he to" rewording needed here. "and (tehn) talk" then? I really loved this story! It has a strong story line that is percise yet has simplicity and strong emotions. Easy to relate to and follow. You never know what life will bring in our hours of dispair and something so small can mean so much~! Thank you for sharing your story with me! I truly enjoyed you...
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This was very well written and thought out! Percise and no lagging parts. Great flow! No grammar errors. Good luck!
Query Letter / The Illusion Query
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Query Letter / What do I do first???
I really liked your letter. It had smooth transitions with out lagging parts. Concise vocabulary although I would try to find another word rather that starting quite a few of your sentences with (To) I would omit part of your first sentence "This is a letter that is crying out for help and guidance in what steps to take, because" I would start your letter here "I am humbly asking for an opportunity to present my literary projects in hopes of some positive feedback" I would omit "some positive...
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Very well thought out and written Query Letter. It runs smoothly without interruptions or lagging content. Very nice Job!
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