annafreeman's profile

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AGE: 35
LOC: Smyrna, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 11

My name is Anna and I have been writing since I was 9 years old.  I’ve never published anything professionally but would love to.  The closest I’ve come to it is making my own Christmas cards every year to give to family and friends.

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Journalism / The Way It Should Be
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The Way It Should Be In “The Story of an Hour” by Kate Chopin and “Love Should Grow Up Like a Wild Iris in the Fields” by Susan Griffin, the two authors show the irony of the different ways love presents itself in relationships. The theme of irony is depicted by bringing to light the misconception of where love is found in relationships, and more importantly, where it is not. Chopin’s short story depicts a marriage where the wife felt more of an obligation towards her husband than love and he...
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Poetry / insomnia
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i challenged pain and wrestled love, only to be reacquainted with my old companion loneliness. now the silence is so loud, i want to tell my heart to shut up. i shouldn't say, i miss the view of my world from me and you. i remember your voice wishing sweet dreams, and then off to bed to snuggle with the promise of tomorrow. instead i have words of finality playing on a broken record and tomorrow never comes. quietly, i miss the view of my world from me and you. we dance a dance of do's and do...
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Poetry / Finally
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2 Reviews   1 Comment
I’ve been looking for magic most of my life. Trying to see it in faces and feel it in touches but all it would leave me was empty. My life was a puzzle I’d struggled relentlessly to solve and questions would plague and poke me, wondering if I would ever find the missing part to my heart. Then God led you into my life and instantly nothing became everything. You brought me happiness by the arms full and then took my hand to lead me where there was even more. You revealed the magic I had overlo...
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4 Reviews   4 Comments
I was beautiful once. and knew love by it's first name. It was brief, But for a short while, I knew what it was to be valued; and to feel like my feet did not touch the ground. It was a magic carpet ride, flying and soaring and gliding through time that seemed to never run out. But there was less sand than I imagined in the hourglass of us. It seems like forever ago The last hour, the last minute, The last second, in your arms. Fingertips on my skin; The gentleness of you. Hearing you whisper...
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Poetry / Remembering
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The first time I heard your voice My heart whispered To let you in. You had knocked and were waiting But my last visitor Had left things out of place. And a smell of rotten happiness I had learned to live with. So, you waited. Patiently And silently I hoped You would go away. Every day you would knock again And every day I would peep out, From the inside with White knuckles fighting to turn the lock. Until one day I closed my eyes And held my breath, And cracked the door, just a little. Enoug...
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Poetry / Overnight
The only thing I didn't really "like" about this one was the last stanza. The verse is different that the rest and it just changes the flow of it and makes it awkward. If it's supposed to be more of a song, that would make sense. I love the whole piece and the way I can see the 2 friends laughing and remembering times they haven't thought about in ages. Great stuff!
Short Story / The Roses... revision
What a beautiful picture you painted of a remarkable woman! Like most remarkable women though, they have a weakness that leads to their downfall and in her case, it was death. That is very sad but what great memories she leaves her grandaughter after she is gone. The part about scattering her ashes and feeling them fall on her fingertips and lips just struck me in a way I've never concidered before. That is a person and parts of her, part of her "life" is that close. Great thought! Good job o...
I'm wondering who died - the grandson or someone else? If it's someone else, which I imagine it is (b/c she says "when I was twenty"), then tell us more about that person. I do like the relationship between the boat, the oars, the water and the grandson. Good imagery with the words and I really got a good picture in my mind from the part about the water's resistance against the boat. I just want to know more about the person she misses. Is it a husband, lover, son, daughter, friend? Someone t...
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