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Calm yourself as you read. Breathe deeply, relax. Hear the wind russle through the tree branches above your head. Hear the sound of a stream flowing over rocks. Yes, its just ahead, off to your right. Feel the earth underfoot. Feel how it cushions you as you walk. Hear the sounds of the forest. See the way the light dances through the tree branches. Your approaching the stream now, light dancing on the water. Softly you hear a new music, rain. Free yourself of boundaries, lay upon the moss, f...
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Havent read the first part. This part was good I thought. Check your spelling before submitting. We do all make mistakes.
This reminds me of the beat nik clubs. I am not quailified to rate. I did enjoy the reading of it.
This I enjoyed. To capture how wind chimes can touch the soul's memory. The way you moved from the chimes to the dance to the storm. Then the song of the crickets. Wonderful.
The words paint a picture of pain and fear, of hiding to survive. Perhaps work on the flow of it. The writing itself I enjoyed.
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