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It was a long story but it managed to keep my interest throughout which is an acomplishment. At times I felt I was in the story and the plot moved along very nicely. The only thing I may do is add more details. I feel you can never have enough details. Very good story and superheroes arent usually my cup of tea.

I enjoyed it alot. The title caught my attention and you really captured how this persom was unique. It also brought up many of todays issues and what people thought of them. I really like the opinion of someone who is different. Sorry I cant help much with editing but it was an awesome article.

I actually like this very much and usually I stay away from horrors. It started out with her having a feeling that most people can relate to and that is imagining someone get hurt. But you do a good job of magnifying it and making it worse. It gets to the point where she cannot bear it. You describe the seyying perfectly and the descriptions are blended very well. My mind is just racing as to what happens next. Does she kill her husband or back off? I dont know. Very good job.

I actually like this even though I do not usually like real life stories. This was down to earth and I understood it. I have had my wisdom teeth out and have tasted whisky and can relate that what makes it appealing to me. usually a blog will say crazy things that noone else does but I could relate>(sorry said it again). Very nice job.