I like it, however lil unclear if the she's you. Going back from the she to I, I would assume. Am I reading right?

I love it.. All of it.. I want to paint the stars and kiss in the cheap seats. Fun, romantic, realistic.

Interesting. Realistic. Sticks in your mind and like the touch of cliche...

Dark but good, I definitely felt like I was there.

Unique. Original. All words for different, so you are different and special in your own way. Gives honest views at everday things.

Interesting view on a life I don't live, thank you for taking me there.

I love this, especially how the last line wraps it all up and you can feel it. You can also see it and how grand the sight.

By the title I expected something entirely different. My favorite line is From life and it's dark pleasure. You can feel and imagine the swelling of the tears, wanting release? I enjoy how it displays the release of cleansing. You have to have good and bad.. Sunshine and rain and everything has to start somewhere. Very enjoyable.

I like the motions that you take us through. I assume the first moments are the encounter of the brothers? Did I read it wrong? The thoughts of gossamer strands leaves the bond unseen one is left behind and one exists. It is a good start, this is most certainly a book that one would pick up and not be able to put down until it was done. Good job, and sorry it took so long to review.