aquaruischick's profile
AGE:
37
LOC: Bridgeport, CT
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 04
LOC: Bridgeport, CT
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 04
I love to write poetry, short stories, songs and want to be published in the future. I havd a dog and 5 cats.
I also love music and reading.
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For all my friends and fellow writers. I have requested my account be deleted. I cannot deal with the fucking bullshit I receive whenever I review writings. I follow the guidelines and still get them returned. The moderators here are fucking lousy and need to redo those guidelines. I am fed up with having negative balances for credit that im gone. I will find a better more professional site to share my writing with. good bye april
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This is a great start for a song. You need to add a chorus and not just verses. Do not repeat this line in every verse Sweet Son of Mine,
This limerick i agree with 100%. I have received some nasty reviews from ppl and i have had my reviews overturned but they have not this is why i am leaving this bs site.
This is a nice poem. Add more descriptive words and more details and it will be even better.
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This is a very well written piece. You have the potential to expand this into a bigger story or manybe even a book at a later date.
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I am a little confused with this play? Who are the charactes exaclty? Who are they waiting for and to kill him or her for what? GIve details of the settings and your characters. What does Valin and edourdo look like? THis piece is ok but has no storyline. It is hard to follow.
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