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4 Reviews   2 Comments
The patter of rain On fallen leaves Reminder winter draws nigh. Burning wood fragrance Entwined with the flames Ballet before our eyes. In warmth we nestle No words spoken Our bodies echo our thoughts. The year’s labor ending Ushers love’s occasion All while the floral sleeps.
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Version 1
9 Reviews   14 Comments
Patter of rain on fallen leaves Reminder winter draws nigh. Burning wood fragrance Entwined with the flames Ballet before our eyes. In warmth we snuggle No dictum spoken Our bodies echo our thoughts. The year’s labor ending Ushers love’s occasion All while the floral sleeps.
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Version 1
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This tree bared its blood. From our blade We carved our love. Immortalized, Everlasting, without end Without end for all to see. Seasons shall pass us by. Our souls will transcend. Eternity will be our home. Immortalized, Everlasting, without end. Before God we will carve it again,
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Version 5
2 Reviews   5 Comments
The outstretched hand Pierced internet lines Leading me up Through untried paths Executing direction With typewritten lines My artistic foundation shattered. Fortified with creative sight Overwhelmed by possibilities I still knew Yes I knew I could struggle through it.
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Version 4
4 Reviews   11 Comments
The outstretched hand Pierced internet lines Leading me up Through untried paths Executing direction In type written script My artistic foundation Had been shattered. Being fortified With creative light but overwhelmed by possibilities I still knew Yes Somehow I knew I could struggle through it.
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Version 3
3 Reviews   6 Comments
The outstretched hand Pierced internet lines Leading me up Through untried paths Executing direction In type written script My artistic foundation Had been shattered. Being fortified With creative light And overwhelmed by possibilities I still knew Yes Somehow I knew I could struggle through it.
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Version 1
7 Reviews   12 Comments
"For most people, color will enhance their looks; but some people have an inner beauty that will enhance the very color they wear".
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Version 2
2 Reviews   6 Comments
Her outstretched hand Pierced through internet lines, Leading me down untried paths, Executing direction with her writen script, My foundation had been shattered. Illumined with creative light, Despite endless new possibilities, I knew; Yes, somehow I knew, I could struggle through it.
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Version 3
6 Reviews   6 Comments
"Your smile is like an oasis to the weary desert traveler".
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Quotes / Your Smile
Version 1
7 Reviews   9 Comments
"Your smile is like an oasis to the weary desert traveler".
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