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LOC: Curtis Bay, MD
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LAST LOGIN: August 06
LOC: Curtis Bay, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 06
As a kid growing up in a family of song writers and poetry writers. I kinda felt like I didn’t belong. My poetry wans’t as heart felt as everyone elses. Finally I found my calling. It wasn’t poetry or song writing.
I was writing about people my age that went through the same hardships I did as a child.
One teacher always believed in my writing abilities but she said I would need a real good editor.
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THE BEGINNING Alana Cosset was not the average seventeen-year-old. She was wise beyond her years and had been that way since the day she was born. Alana was in her senior year at Kings Lake High and had planned to go to Princeton next year. She loved living in the state of New Jersey. It had become her home within the past four years. Before Alana moved to New Jersey, she was living in New York and things were dreadful. Her father was a tough cop so as expected every gang in the NY wanted his...
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THE BEGINNING Alana Cosset was not the average seventeen-year-old. She was wise beyond her years and had been that way since the day she was born. Alana was in her senior year at Kings Lake High and had planned to go to Princeton next year. She loved living in the state of New Jersey. It had become her home within the past four years. Before Alana moved to New Jersey, she was living in New York and things were not too good. Her father was a tough cop so as expected every gang in the NY wanted...
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There are six females that I have found to be the most important people in my life. It hurts me that I am helpless for four of them. The other two I know can take perfectly good care of themselves do I don't need to worry as often. Unfortunately the other three I constantly worry about. My little angel is in trouble again cause of the little brat living with her. I ought to go to the brat and ruffel her up a bit but I know that is not best. I have to think about my little angel so my friend w...
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Lost Ones When times get like this I appreciate the friends I have cause I never know when one of them might disappear. Since I have graduated from Job Corps I've had 3 really good friends die. It hurts to know that a person that I have known for just the year almost two has passed. I mean living in the same room or the same dorm for months at a time you are bound to get attached to them. Even if they tell you to choke on the cafeteria food and die you still form some type of bond if you shar...
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I can't help it. I've got my eyes on you. I've got an obsession with you and I don't know why. As many times as you have made me laugh You have also made me cry I still keep coming back for more. Is it the sex or the way you hold me close at night. it might just be the way we make up after a fight Whatever it is I dont think I will ever be able to explain.
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I think this could turn out into a great piece whatever you decide to turn it into. Keep up the good work.
This is a very powerful piece. It speaks volumes to me. I guess at some point and time we all feel like this. I hope that you are able to publish this. Good luck
This is a very good piece. It flows very nicely. This is easily one of the best I have ever read. Keep up the good work.
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Thats too funny. Good luck with attracting an agent
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Wow I so get what you mean. Nice work with this piece. You dod have a few misspelled words in there though. Good luck on getting it published
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