avkoshy's profile

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AGE: 43
LOC: India
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 15

self-proclaimed disciple of jesus, human being, male, family man, poet,writer,critic, teacher of english language and literature and creative writing, interests include writing besides almost everything else, living in bangalore at present, and yeah, the picture of the tiger happened randomly so letting it stay as in andre breton’s kind of automatic writing

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Humor/Satire / Some light-hearted fun.
Version 5
4 Reviews   1 Comment
“This does not qualify.” “Your credits have not been taken away.” “Your credits have been taken away.” I see that everywhere One has the chance to be humbled and educated. Personally, I welcome all reviews. Being nobody. Even one that only says “done” That I can make neither head nor tail of The first part of which seems to have come Somewhere else in a comment. But I see that all are not so catholic In their taste or views. Poets are not always critics And do know how to appreciate. I never ...
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Humor/Satire / Some light-hearted fun.
Version 4
0 Reviews   0 Comments
“This does not qualify.” “Your credits have not been taken away.” “Your credits have been taken away.” I see that everywhere One has the chance to be humbled and educated. Personally, I welcome all reviews. Being nobody. Even one that only says “done” That I can make neither head nor tail of The first part of which seems to have come Somewhere else in a comment. But I see that all are not so catholic In their taste or views. Poets are not always critics And do know how to appreciate. I never ...
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Version 8
5 Reviews   3 Comments
she sits elsewhere submit-saves these poems almost a poem a minute -"a stranger to my eyes?"- appears as if by a spell i read to write reviews good and bad earn a few urbis credits unlock my reviews but become spellbound "nothing to change" i'm forced to type nothing to say they are just once too often word perfect reworked many times? great? mediocre? i really don't know i'm just a poet though once i was more and what the hell is this? you’re only nineteen. f from someplace i don’t think i k...
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Humor/Satire / Some light-hearted fun.
Version 3
8 Reviews   7 Comments
“This does not qualify.” “Your credits have not been taken away.” “Your credits have been taken away.” I see that everywhere One has the chance to be humbled and educated. Personally, I welcome all reviews. Being nobody. Even one that only says “done” That I can make neither head nor tail of The first part of which seems to have come Somewhere else in a comment. But I see that all are not so catholic In their taste or views. Poets are not always critics And do know how to appreciate. I never ...
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Version 26
5 Reviews   7 Comments
“Memory’s a stranger, history’s for fools” – Roger Waters 1.Advent The showers began from the middle. Clouds billowing, downwards and up - They kept opening & closing their mouths. Goldfish behind glass, in the aquarium. I heard no sound. Things moved, not moving; as in poetry and when timelessness is caught on celluloid - The buildings became branches in a storm. Leaves falling from on high - Galileo’s feather and ball? - & when they hit the ground, turned red. Two giraffes, sideways, sidere...
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Poetry / Over the Ocean
There are quite a few lines that transit too abruptly into something else and i am unable to see the connection if not for that it's a good poem
good poem and i don't think i want to try and change anything in it.... self-destruction could be hyphenated pierce my heart starts a new stanza so i would leave a line of empty space before it
Poetry / ?
Removed
needs more clarity and editing
needs reworking so sound is sustained throughout powerful thoughts but can be refined
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)