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I couldn't wait to go Easter egg hunting. Daddy had said that bad girls didn't get to go easter egg hunting, and that I was a bad girl, like my mommy. "LOOK! Oh, there's an egg! Better get it before the other kids do," said Maura, holding my basket. I ran off to the egg and held it up for her to see. "Got it! There's nother one!" I raced off for the egg, reaching it precisely as another kid did. Both of us reached for the egg, and I got it first. The other kid, who was a bout six, pushed me d...
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I couldn't wait to go Easter egg hunting. Daddy had said that bad girls didn't get to go easter egg hunting, and that I was a bad girl, like my mommy. "LOOK! Oh, there's an egg! Better get it before the other kids do," said Maura, holding my basket. I ran off to the egg and held it up for her to see. "Got it! There's nother one!" I raced off for the egg, reaching it precisely as another kid did. Both of us reached for the egg, and I got it first. The other kid, who was a bout six, pushed me d...
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I couldn't wait to go Easter egg hunting. Daddy had said that bad girls didn't get to go easter egg hunting, and that I was a bad girl, like my mommy. "LOOK! Oh, there's an egg! Better get it before the other kids do," said Maura, holding my basket. I ran off to the egg and held it up for her to see. "Got it! There's nother one!" I raced off for the egg, reaching it precisely as another kid did. Both of us reached for the egg, and I got it first. The other kid, who was a bout six, pushed me d...
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Mari couldn't wait to go easter egg hunting. Daddy had said that bad girls didn't get to go easter egg hunting, and that she was a bad girl, as was mommy. "LOOK! Oh, there's an egg! Better get it before the other kids do," said Maura, holding Mari's basket. "Got it! There's nother one!" Mari raced off for the egg, reaching it precisely as another kid did. They bothe reached for the egg, and Mari got it first. The other kid, who was a bout six, pushed Mari down, and grabbed her egg. Mari began...
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Mari couldn't wait to go easter egg hunting. Daddy had said that bad girls didn't get to go easter egg hunting, and that she was a bad girl, as was mommy. "LOOK! Oh, there's an egg! Better get it before the other kids do," said Maura, holding Mari's basket. "Got it! There's nother one!" Mari raced off for the egg, reaching it precisely as another kid did. They bothe reached for the egg, and Mari got it first. The other kid, who was a bout six, pushed Mari down, and grabbed her egg. Mari began...
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Beautiful. It's a shame what happens to her, what people can do to each other. This story makes you feel for the main character. I ceased to think of her as a character in that short time I read the story and as a real person I was getting to know. This is a very touching and true to life story. Thank you.
Interesting. Maybe a good title, but maybe something ...somewhat different, still in reference to art would work better. Feels like the title is a shoe that doesn't quite fit. I think I understood what you were getting at, and I like what I read. I had to read it twice (Once aloud) to get the feel for it though. Nice work.
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