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As it seems most discerning inquisitive inquirers instantaneously infer that an individual who likes to plant bombs and murder innocent people completely at random will probably and predominantly prefer to keep their more private personal poignant needs and sorely intimate desires well within a dark and very deep closet… Perhaps a cave, or at least a very large hole in the ground… For if covert in committing wanton widespread wholesale murder, how much more so must be their secr...
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i'm not sure the earth was ever a true paradise, unless you believe in the garden of eden, and if you believe the bible then you know that there's no going back --- the end is predicted, only nobody knows when.
your poetry is deeper than most, philisophical almost, and almost morbid as well, like saying, what's the point since we all have to die? i see you're 16, and i think your poetry is highly advanced for your age. i really look forward to reading more of your work in about five or ten years, God willing. in the meanwhile keep writing. you have talent. sincerely, barrett allen stites
dying is a lot like being born, same phenomenon, and we don't have a choice about either.
beautiful. you have talent. i thought "to feel is to be paralyzed" would've worked better for me --- but that's just opinion. i do enjoy your poetry.
i'm not sure people have a choice. some are right, some wrong, but their experiences make them so.
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